June 18th, 2011 at 01:35pm
I Don't Wanna Feel. - Comments
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Wow. Just wow. You know what'd be awesome? If you made a story that was the beginning and the end extended of this one. Like how the short story Flowers for Algernon was made into a novel.November 20th, 2010 at 08:53pm
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amazing plot
you`re very good with emotions it had me very upset
you`re also good with description
one thing bad is you never really said what she did, for a while I figured she was a cuter
but its just a amazing story
I love how you say everything and how it`s not just about her it`s about the brother and sister alsoApril 5th, 2010 at 01:29am -
I know I'm kinda late on commenting this, but I was really impressed by the feeling you put into this.
I wasn't expecting this to be an awesomeopossum one shot or anything, but it really was.
Favorite parts:
""She died a long time ago, man," Dally said quietly."
"In order to live, you have to feel. And sometimes, I don't want to feel." <---That was beyond beautiful.
Good job, good job.December 14th, 2009 at 12:53am -
I cried.
I love The Outsiders, and this was the best one shot I've read by this ever!September 6th, 2009 at 11:12pm -
this was, in no uncertain terms, one of the best one-shots i've ever read.
you have amazing talent when writing to convey emotions in your work. i swear, it gave me chills. =)
and, plus, The Outsiders is one of my all-time favourite books, ever.January 6th, 2009 at 12:30am -
Poor Soda. :(December 18th, 2008 at 08:57pm
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I really like this. It probably if you wanted could be made into a short story. But, since it's a one shot....yea, it's still great. I enjoyed it very much.November 27th, 2008 at 08:28am
I found this story again.
I'm in love. <3