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fuck it confused me.
I'm walking in a world that doesn't exist. ...But in my head Mikey died. Dunno why, but, yeah, he died.

So.. its pretty much Donnie Darko but to the extreme? Frank's telling Mikey to kill people... But like its actually Mikey deciding this. and the episode of csi I watched last night where this woman hyponotised these people to kill... So Mikey's all crazy and thinks Frank is real where is isnt?

Idk.... I'm confused, but I really enjoyed this story! :)

Oh my god. Oh. My. Fucking. God.

I just read the whole thing without pausing once, I couldn't. I feel like my mind has been raped. This is the most horrible story I have ever read, and it was fucking beautiful!!!!!!!!! You should be an author, hell, this story itself should be published as a novel. I mean, I've read like all your other frikey stuff, but this is just... WOW!

Wow. I just read this, and I am totally blown away! I love how you described every chapter and the ending, wow, that was amazing!

Good job! xo

Oh my god, I cannot express to you how much I loved this story.
You slapped me around with words and scenarios that I would never have used and I just soaked it all in. It was such a roller coaster of mind fuckery, and I just wanted it to NEVER END.

I really love this story! where did you come up with the title?

I love this! But I was a little confuse with the last chapter, did mikey kill frank, or kill himself?

Oh my god that was powerful. :O
And totally the right thing to do, in my opinion.
Well, kind of. No-one deserves to die, even murderers.

Whoa, that story took an insane twist.
Your an awesome writer!

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Oh holy shit.

Somehow, the words 'Stockholm Syndrome' has kept appearing in my mind throughout this story, but so does so many other words too, so . . . yeah. Who really knows. It does, however, seem my first idea as to how this will end/what really goes on was accurate, but honestly, with this story it's hard to say anything for sure.

aww only one more chapter? damn i love this story

Well fuck me, I haven't been here in a long fucking time and I apologize for it. I've been extremely busy and being without a computer for a couple months proved to a bit problematic.

First off, I'd like to (for whatever reason) congratulate you on how far you've managed to keep this going. Even with such a 'short' topic to work with, like murder, you've kept it going with different twists and turns on every single chapter that actually made me want to read each word in each paragraph, instead of just skipping to dialogue like I often do with other author's stories.

The end of this last chapter, when you've actually gotten to the point where you're starting to bring in the descriptions of these murders that Frank commits, you finally get a look into what's been going on 'behind the scenes', where we, the readers, don't get to see. Until now, that is.

I liked how you described how scared Mikey seemed to be and it's funny how he's finally realized exactly what Frank does, but chooses not to do anything about it because he's slightly terrified. (Even if the other is about 8489375438574 inches shorter than he is, but I digress :XD)

Regardless, you've done a fantastic job on this so far and I can't fucking wait until the next chapter. You've left all of us in suspense.

I haven't commented this story before, because I just read all ten chapters and I'm gasping for more.
I'm not sure how it's going to end, I have an idea but I might be wrong and that's a thing I definitely love about your stories.
I don't normally read slash but the relationship between Frank and Mikey is twisted yet delicious and your descriptions are amazing, the first chapter drew me in.
This is one of the most original and daring stories I've read, because what you're writing about is difficult to do without it sounding disastrous. You've nailed it though, just, oh wow. It's fantastic.
You're a brilliant writer.

FINALLY Mikey is coming to realise how fucked up Frank is!
For once, I have no idea how this is going to end. It seems to happen a lot with your stories.
Loved it.

oh no! the end is near! i dont want it to end!

:cheese:

I have approximately umpteen ideas as to how this will end, but I have a feeling all of them are completely wrong. I don't think I've commented this story before (I have read since the very first chapter, though), but that's merely because its brilliance is too good to describe in a simple comment.

But, yeah, pretty much my favourite My Chemical Romance/Frikey story on Mibba. :tehe:

Yeah, pretty much completely love this =D
Its so original and wierd and funny and tiwsted and amazing.
I love you, love this.

i loved every chapter,
but it confused me,im probbaly going to ask you to explain it to me later:tehe:
but i wanna know the ending now:XD
good jop

Darling, this was one lovely chapter.

*dreamy sigh*

I'm sad that this is nearly over, but I'm so excited to see how you are planning on ending it. I can feel everything from the beginning slowly coming together and making sense of everything that's happening so far; AHH! It's so wonderful.

Such a break and a breath of fresh air from the mundane nonsense that's being written these days... it's just gorgeous.

I love knowing the background of the story and knowing what's lying ahead. I adore this. More when you can, please. :arms:

The end is near? THE END IS NEAR?!
D:

This story makes me nervous every time I read it... I may have said that before, but that just shows the consistancy of your writing.
Mikey seems to want to fight against Frank when the latter isn't enticing him into his own opinions. Maybe he will... God, I'm so nervous!! Damn you.

Off to read Obsession now...