My first ever mpreg that I've read and liked. Sure, I still don't really care for the thought of it, but you did it really good.
The only think I didn't like was that the story was written in present tense, as that often gets really confusing - but that's your way of writing and I respect that.
Just wanted to tell you that I liked it. Loved the cuteness of it. I'm so sick of all heartwrecking stories out there - damnit I need some pure fluff xD
Finally! Wow that was very long, AND FUCKING INCREDIBLE! You did so (insert HUGE word that is better than amwasome, incredible, and amazing at the same time) for an m-preg!