On the Edge - Comments

HAH!! I finished the story!!!!!! It was aammaazziinngg!!! I love the way you wrote the last few chapters!! I thought you were ending it so you would have to write a sequel!!!! But you didnt!!! WOW!!! xD

LOVED IT!

Oh, wow I loved this story. It took me forever to read it cause I'd always get interrupted for some reason or another, but I'm glad I finally finished.
It's amazing. <3
Tom and Nikki were just adorble together and the whole story was creative and entertaining.
I'm so going to go read all your other stories. XP
Anyways, great job. :]
I hope there's a sequal ;D

Nooo! I don't want it to end! *cries*
You better not EVER fucking take down this story or i swear imma come after you like a mofo >.>

It's was great, hun. I'm happy they FIANLLY got back together, but what has become of Bill and (inster chicks name i forgot)? And does Georg ever get a girl? What about Gustav? Have they lost there love?

XD I'm probely confusing right now, but thats how i am when i'm half asleep (yes at 4:42 PM im half asleep) But yes. I hope you get back soon and give us chapters for By Your Side *hugs*

Good Luck!
-Tolii :]

(BTW I wanted to leave a long comment, hope it's long enough :D)

That's not fair. JessaKay has your cell number but my new cellphone isn't even going to be coming until at least July 10th, so I can't call you until you're already back *sob* God, it's been like FOREVER since I've been able to call you.

ANYWAY.

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shuddup Savi I know what you're gonna say

That was funny, especially since as I read 'what needs to be fixed', I was like thinking "Hmm, this and that and that grammar, and you spelled 'four' wrong at the end of ch. 71." (Which you did, by the way.)

You know me so well. Just like I know you.

Anyway. Very good ending. I like how you incorporated the title into the story.Now our story, bitte.
Everyone's going to kill you if you don't write a sequel.
...maybe you should.I'd write Tom's perspective.
*hides*

...I would, though :file:
...if you wanted.
*cough*

TomiBear you should so make a sequel so we can see what happens to all of the characters in the future! I loved this story so much!

TWIN OMG it was so entirely amazing!!
Wowzers, i can't believe it's over already lol but at least we get to read this kickass story BYS next xD i LOVE that one sooo much!!
Good thing i have your cell number so even when you are gone i can still talk to you :]
Love you chicka, you rock my socks!!

plz make a sequel

Will there be a sequal? I need one. Lmfao. Anywho, this was absolutely amazing. *claps loud and obnoxiously* Love it!

Yay u used the title of the story in it! i love when people do that in stories and movies =]
sad its done

Hurry and get the last chapter out. I need to know what happens.
This chapter was amazing, by the way.

post!! please!!!
and yay im glad she was forced over there

nooo it cant be over!!! i love this story!

:xGah! I hate cliffhangers...but I do them to Oh well! I'm still happy cause now Tom's baacckkk!! How will it go, huh? huh!?! Update soon, yeah?

Aw. This is so sweet.

I don't see how it's possible that he couldn't see you love him like this. You tell me the same thing about me and Bill, but honestly, Liz, it's the same with you. He's got to know. He just has to. If you can write something like this, and just give it this kind of emotion and feeling, you'll be able to get it through Tom's head that you love him.

Just six more months.

I honestly do love this story. Even if it does have awful grammar. It's so sweet, really.

I'm waiting for my longass comment back XD

I just had to end with that. Anywayyyyy...it's gonna happen. Really and truly.

You can't stop there!
MORE!

he's gonna show up now isnt he?

the story is gettin better and better plz keep updating

That was awesome.
Update soooooon?!?!?!?!

YOURE THE AUTHOR MAKE THE MIRACLE HAPPEN!!