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  • Dragon1359

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    Wow this is an old story. I must say, you are an extraordinary writer. Your dialogue is flawless and extremely realistic, it was one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Thank you for writing this. To say the least, I was in tears. Nice job. Very Happy
    June 27th, 2014 at 06:43am
  • Abby_S

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    Cried like a freaking baby after reading the end. With the way Mikey was talking I could tell something was gonna happen :/
    September 15th, 2012 at 03:49am
  • DanaPixie

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    Wow. I loved the ending, i cried so much. But i just knew with the way Mikey was acting before they left that they'd die, I absoloutely love this story, and all of your other Frerards. You're a great writer
    <3 xoxo
    January 8th, 2012 at 06:32am
  • MeIsThalia

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    I knew he was gonna die! BUt im still crying!
    July 27th, 2011 at 08:53am
  • XMCRJunkieX

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    omg! I knew it!! well, I though it was a vampire at the beginning, then I though it was some kind of gosth, then I forgot.
    But it was so shocking to actually hear that it was a real vampire....U_U well as real as they can be, not some kind of cullen ..... stefan sort of vampire, but very spike.....Eric vampire!!!
    love love!
    I didn´t think G will be okay with all this....I can´t wait for the next one....I hope is not the last one....
    January 23rd, 2011 at 10:58pm
  • Pyrotechnicolour

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    However much I love / am addicted to you stories I will never. EVER. Forgive your for killing them! T-T
    January 18th, 2011 at 12:09am
  • MyBeautifulGeemance

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    ahh i just read this...and i cried...i dont think it helps that im listening to Find A Way by The Used...lmao! great story (:
    June 25th, 2010 at 01:20am
  • Hezzarther

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    You fucker. You made me cry.
    December 26th, 2009 at 11:33pm
  • demolitionlover13

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    Yeah, As Soon As Gerard said There Would Be A Next Time, I Knew He Would Die. Wasn't Sure About Frank Though...
    I Loved The Ending. Most People Would Have Made them Get Better, Get Married And Adopt A Kid. So, Yeah, I Perfer This Ending.
    June 18th, 2009 at 05:47pm
  • xXLucky1911Xx

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    =...[

    Aw.
    June 10th, 2009 at 03:43am
  • whisperedsecrets

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    okay so i know this is loooongly overdue but i just read this story and i have to say that i was crying dead on for the last two chapters! that was a tragically sad yet beautiful way to end teh story! i loved it sooo much. i was thinking dude sequal! but when that part came i became a fucking water fountain. very emotional but beautiful.
    March 11th, 2009 at 07:34pm
  • Alice Verney

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    powerful ending
    January 24th, 2009 at 12:20am
  • GiveMeTherapy

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    i just read this. i love your writing, it's amazing <3
    im friggen crying now. blehh. :D
    January 21st, 2009 at 04:27am
  • vegetagirl13

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    Lol, i was so hooked on the story i reread it.. an cryed again at the ending even though i knew what was going to happen, :'( poor micky!!! *sniffle sniffle*
    January 14th, 2009 at 05:17pm
  • pointless pineapple

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    That sucks!!!!!!!!
    They died~! *criessss*
    ....The story doesn't suck at all, infact it's cute as fuck but them dying...
    I didn't want it to happen; I wanted Mikey to be wrong so badly.
    *sigh* Amazing story. So beautiful yet sad.
    I'm obviously more for happy endings..
    <3333333333
    January 2nd, 2009 at 09:01am
  • Coruja Do Vampiro

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    I don't think a story has ever made me cry so much but it wasn't all sadness not really. I hope you write lots more stories and i shal read them for sure as this one was amazing ..... so amazing infact i may have to go back and read it again although i think i'll skip the last few chapters don't think i can manage to read that agaain yet!
    xxx
    January 2nd, 2009 at 04:51am
  • Dark Magical Dreams

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    tat was so rommantic
    December 31st, 2008 at 09:14pm
  • LoveTheBlood

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    :O gasp! you killed them omg! i actually cried lmao.
    It was amazing, i loved it :)
    December 31st, 2008 at 02:00am
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    That made me cry.
    The fireman suit wasn't even used.
    It was so sad, and I was listening to Dear God when I read this.
    It made me cry more.
    <333
    December 30th, 2008 at 11:43pm
  • Hey Jude

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    well we really cant kill you, i mean you foreshadowed it pretty well
    its just death is so final, you know? id prefer they be paralyzed or something, idk...
    still liked it though. you're a very good writer :]
    December 30th, 2008 at 10:22pm