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  • Grunger

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    I fucking hate you. No, I don't, but I'm really upset! :( How could you kill such a perfect couple?! Oh well, I guess now they can have kindy sex for eternity together! :) Great chapters, although I'm more of a 'happy-ending-girl'! It was a pleasure reading this!
    December 30th, 2008 at 08:02pm
  • tokioschemicalparade

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    i cried which i never do but they died happy i didnt really read thelast chapter i couldnt see it :'(
    December 30th, 2008 at 05:53pm
  • purple skittles

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    I made myself wait a few minutes before I commented so I didn't say anything in anger.
    It was actually pretty unexpected, but I suppose it's better than "And they lived happily ever after."
    Oh, well.
    I really enjoyed this story.
    Thank you :D
    -Katie
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    December 30th, 2008 at 04:40pm
  • AllTimeRomance.

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    Woww.. I fucking loved this story i must say...
    But, all good things must come to an end i guess :]
    No matter how sad, or tragic....

    It was so sad though! I cried! Again! ><
    It was a beautiful way for them to say goodbye, very emotional ending. :)

    However cliche this story was, i loved every bit of it ^^, I really did. Definately one of my favourites (:
    December 30th, 2008 at 03:36pm
  • xxeekha_mikeyxx

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    very sad!!!
    =[
    December 30th, 2008 at 01:15pm
  • Beauty Is In The Eye

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    omg that was so sad i was crying by the end of it
    but i must say that this story was really awesome well done
    and happy new year to you too
    December 30th, 2008 at 12:28pm
  • who

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    OMG .... NOOOOOOOOOO THEY DIED ....... THIS SI SOOO FUCKING TRAGIC ... IM FULLY CRYING !!!... ITS NOT FAIR !!! WHAT ABOUT MIKEY .... WHATS HE GONNA DO WITH OUT THEMM .... WHAT AM I GONNA DO WITH OUT THEMM ......NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... *cough* ok moving on ...

    THAT WAS A FANTASTIC STORY !!!... I LOVE IT ... I WILL NEVER FORGET IT !! .... I WILL FOREVER BE INLOVE WITH THIS STORY ....... YOU HAVE LEFT A MAKE WITH ME ......

    Love you !

    XxClaudie
    December 30th, 2008 at 08:45am
  • who

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    HOLLYYY SHIT .. I ONLY JUST NOTICED ..... DID YOU FUCKING KILL THEM .... OHH NO YOU FUCKING DIDNT ... IF YOU DID YOU BETTER BE JESUS AND PERFORM A MIRICAL AND BRING THEM FROM THE DEAD ... THEN IM GONNA HUNT THE PERSON RESPOSIBLE FOR THIS TRAGIC CRASH ..... IM GONNA .... IMM GONNA .... i dono yet ... ill get back to you with that one ,....
    XxClaudie
    December 30th, 2008 at 08:31am
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    OH MYY GODDDD ..... THIS CAN NOT HAPPEN !!!
    December 30th, 2008 at 08:28am
  • Jay Lynn

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    Wholy shit i have tears in my eyes, I hope I type this ruight. lol
    God, I HATE YOU FOR KILLING THEM! But I love you for the story so YAY *hugs* Happy New Year to you too...well...early new years...haha
    December 30th, 2008 at 08:28am
  • escape this fate

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    wow I was not expecting that ending... It was so sad I'm crying!!! ... But it was beautiful they way their last words were I love you and they died together
    December 30th, 2008 at 07:46am
  • SpellsUnderTheStars

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You made me so fond of frerards!!!
    But I must say it was a beautiful ending!
    It almost made me cry, it made me angry (for poor little Mikey) and disapointed cuz there's no sequel! But I understand why u did.....but don't ever delete the story because I'll prob come back and read it cuz I like the start :D
    December 30th, 2008 at 07:16am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    :`(
    December 30th, 2008 at 07:07am
  • Veteran

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    so this story had the following:

    -Bullying
    -Falling in love with a bully
    -starting a rocky relationship
    -making it stronger
    -sex (of course)
    -Mysterious warning and caution
    -Car wreck
    and ultimately...Death.

    gotta say, no matter how cliche, i loved this story dearly. i honestly didn't think you'd throw the death in there, but once you get sick of a character you kill em off, best way. (Unfortunatly, they didn't get to role play) I'll be sure to check out your other stories (as i'm one to do) and will mourn the death of this one (and the fictional gerard and the fictional frank. but hey, they died together....how "romantic" *eyeroll*)

    keep this up and get to work on radio man! you can only do one shots for so long...

    Your loyal follower,
    Erica.
    December 30th, 2008 at 06:44am
  • vegetagirl13

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    Noooo ::Crys: its nooot fair!!! i really got hooked now i feel realy really bad :'( poor mikey
    December 30th, 2008 at 06:44am
  • vegetagirl13

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    Noooo ::Crys: its nooot fair!!! i really got hooked now i feel realy really bad :'( poor mikey
    December 30th, 2008 at 06:44am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    O.O Holy....Fucking....Shit!
    December 30th, 2008 at 06:37am
  • Frank_Iero

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    omfg they cant die! they just cant!
    December 30th, 2008 at 06:34am
  • just_mean

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    omfg!

    i actually cried while reading the chapter..

    NO..! dont let them die...

    update more..!

    i need to know what's gonna happen next..
    December 30th, 2008 at 06:33am
  • theused.

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    you're not nice.
    you get me hooked then leave me hanging =[.

    haha, update!
    December 30th, 2008 at 06:30am