Love the ending... But kind of confused. You said the epliogue is when Keira wa born.... But its when shes getting married... did you mean the prologue? Loved this story! Sad its over.
I love it : ) I sat down and read the whole thing, because it was so interesting. There should be a sequal, ahha, Donno what about, maybe Keira can still have kids, :O haha, well anways, I loved it =]
Oh My God!!!! I can't believe I found this story! It is so good! Please update as soon as you can!
And if you want, my story Hallelujah is strangely similar to yours, and I would love for you to read it. You'll see. Even our layouts are sort of similar, only yours is red and mine is blue.
personally I think you may be moving too fast, but I do like vampires and love stories! I think I may know what your going to do... I'll just have to wait and see.