The "Family" Secret - Comments

:) it doesn't suck I love the way you ended it, it keeps you guessing what's gonna happen next :)

Amazing :) I'm officialy Addicted!! :)

I really like this story. There's something about it that calls out to me. At first it was hart to read but the plot is just so interesting that it got my alerts up. I would love it for you to continue and please don't give up on yourself. It's your plot and u shouldn't let anyone else take over. I noticed from the chapters that you have been improving. Keep it up! ^.^ -Nat

Twilight sucks

Oh! Micheal and Nicole are sooo cute together. :D

Chapter 3 kinda scared me. Woah! I thought Micheal was gunna die there for a second! Even though I'm getting the hint that he can't die. haha. again.. great stuff!

The second chapter is just as good as the first! great stuff here! :D

I looooooooooooooooooveeeeeeeeeeee it. :D