OK, I'm finished with this one and I even got up to watch TV for a bit! This story was absolutely amazing and so original. I'm getting rather sick of reading basically the same thing over and over again, so it's nice to find stories that aren't just like everything else. I plan on reading the sequel, but I'll probably start tomorrow, as it's 3 in the morning right now. =) Keep up the awesome =D
hmm....i've only gotten to chapter 15, but i just wanted to say that i very much love the idea and originality of this story. i fully intend on finishing this and reading the sequel by tomorrow =)
Ohmygosh, I just read the whole thing, and I absolutely adored it. It was so beautiful, and amazing, and wonderful, and, just, wow. =) That was a wonderful ending. <333 I can't wait for the sequel!
That was a beautiful ending. I'm sad to see this go, like I am with all stories that come to an end. While it lasted, it was awesome. I cannot wait for the sequel. Seriously. But, at least we have another story to read.
the end? really? aww that was just so sweet. I knew that Frankenkie and Gerard were meant to be. *sigh* why didn't Mary Shelley think of this instead? I wonder how to get dressed while holding hanfs, but damn that is just over load of sweetness.
Oh man you're gonna do the Unicorn thing? I seriously can not wait!
i swear that was the sweetest ending ever even though it had boy sex in it and yes i am a fast reader... ive read all seven harry potter books in one day... dont ask how and yay sequel!!!
sweet end. loved them talking and not forgetting the other while they had their first time. they are so in love and you described that so perfectly. great story (I'm still amazed by the plot idea).
That was the cheesiest, most beautiful thing I have read in a long time. GORGEOUS, my darling. And the last two things they said to each other kinda made me cringe :XD
Also, do you think you could maybe space out the dialogue? Double enter paragraphs? Because, great as it was, my eyes kinda hurt from reading it.
ch 38: i’m normally not into cheesy things, but this… wasn’t even cheesy. it was beautiful… Our eyes meet. My heart stops. Then he looks back down and slowly my heart starts beating again. …time stopped at that moment somehow.
and then when gerard stops midsentence and looks up at frank for a while without speaking. he looks back down again and tells him how much he loves when he turns purple when he blushes. you know how sweet that was? them telling each other that they love the other – it really meant something, because of all the explanation beforehand. so beautiful. the whole chapter was a loveletter in itself and so perfectly written, even I could feel my heart going weird. ;-) and when gerard brakes down and frank promises that he’ll protect him. protect the strong vampire. that just… so beautiful and sweet without getting corny at all. seriously. good job, I loved this so much.
“I can’t feel anything if I can’t feel you,” - “I never felt anything, before I met you,” beautiful, beautiful chapter.
I almost cried. That was beautiful. I'm worse updating. I haven't updated mine much. I need too, though, because House is on tonight, and I try to update mine on House days. But, usually, I don't. :XD