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  • JustVictoria

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    Loved the updates. I liked that Haden and Amelia have to go out and make their own staff. It makes it much more unique and personal. I wonder who that Scott guy was and why he is so interested in Amelia. Also, I wonder what will happen if Haden meets up with that Umacun again. Still liking the story. Maybe make chapters just a little bit longer. Anyway, update soon!
    January 4th, 2009 at 05:23am
  • starlightdreamer

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    Ok, this was the story I was thinking about Natasha. Now I have no idea what Expect the Unexpected is aobut...
    January 1st, 2009 at 07:19pm
  • Emo Heartbreak

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    I've only gotten to chapter four but I have to go run some errands. magnifficent work you too. I fell in love with the first paragraph. I can't wait to read more!
    December 22nd, 2008 at 08:37pm
  • JustVictoria

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    Very unique. The first chapter was great and kept my attention. I'm curious as to what will happen next. Update soon! -subscribes-
    December 16th, 2008 at 10:50am