I Don't Care if the Necklace Fits! I'd Rather Not be Kidnapped by Immortals! - Comments

its amazing

This story was really good, one of the only fantasy stories I've read on Mibba, actually.
The ending was really unexpected, but it was good as so many stories end in "and everyone lived happily ever after" so it was nice to have a twist. She did end up happy, but not in the usual sense, which helped make the ending in a way.
It'll be sad to see it go, but it really was excellent.
:mrgreen:

but...but....aww man. :(
and really? Kay cheated on Ray?!?!
but Nuri... D':
but great chapter. please update soon.

So i just read your entire story.
i loved it...but now i'm stuck here with my jaw hanging open.....Nuri is my favorite character. He can't be all demonic. That's just not fair. And then Elliot never visting her again..... poor Triv.
So now it's 3am and i'm all "WTF?!?"
so please update soon!!!

So was Nuri a demon this whole time or what?
I mean it seem like loved Triv, but now I don't know anymore.
Great update.

XD I love this story! It's freaking AMAZING. More please? {X

I wondered what pay-back plan Triv has for Nuri?
Can't wait for more.

i love the story! i told my friend to e-mail you tewlling you to update... more like demanded... haha. gonna make you a banner!!!!!!!!!!!

I was nice for Triv to see Eliot again, but I want to really know why Nuri was thinking when he hurt her?
can't wait for more soon.

I in the world is wrong with Nuri!!! This is totally not like him.
Can't wait to see what happens next.

holy shit! what the hell happend to nuri? will they break up again i mean they just got together agian (i know they didnt just get together again it has be at least a good 5 to 6 months i just count it that way) and they are a good couple! i think somebody tried to possese nuri or try to cast a spell or something on him! i hope they stay together! what happend at the war? update soon so you can answer my questions!

its awesome so far im only on chapter 8 but im readin fast

okay, im only on chapt 14, but it's REALLY good so far! <3

I absolutely LOVE this story. It's amazing :D

I love this story! It's really good! It was sad that Elliot died :( It also sucked when Nuri and Triv broke up!

So this story is Amazing! I really like it. And I think your an awesome writer. I cant wait till the next chapter

Yay for updates!
I like Elliot and Triv being together, but it sucks that there's a 99.9999% chance of Elliot dying. :|
Can't wait for more. :cute:

I glad that you updated your story. Are Elliot and Viv. really together now?
Well keep up the good work and I will be waiting for your next update.

Sorry I haven't commented in like forever!;
I still love this story!
It's like, in the top 3 stories I like on Mibba[:
And post those chapters faster lmao.
I almost forgot about this wonderful story;
That makes me sad :(

Brilliant, as always.