Causing Havoc and Taking Names - Comments

i take offence to your autors comment alex. lara might not but i do. we take long to write yes, but we have school work to do. we dont particulary want to fail.
good chapter though (Y) keep it up x

ass.

good update. when i finally read it after laughing to much at the opening line. xD

Sorry about the wait, i hope you like it
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Ginger why you pulling me outta tree :O lol
great chapter btw (L)

AHH MY GAWDD. Alex you totally lied to me.. you said ''Its nothing big and probably could have been written better''
its great.. i loved it. ginge obviously loved it.

although i do have one question.. I DO GET TO HAVE MY REVENGE RIGHT? x

wooooooooow AWESOME! and you know what?? i dont care what you say xD it twas just... wow
so yeah belive in what i just said or.. *slap* =] <<< twas the fishh

Awesome chapter =P I was reading it in ict media xD but it wouldnt let me comment lol that was wow... like wow wow ya know? lol

should we be scared that its your turn? lol
I can't wait ^_^
And i think that you're only coming across as bossy because perhaps you're taking charge in the situation? coming into your own abit more, and since Guardian is obviously out of it, you're taking the lead? meh whatever. I'll change it if you like ^_^

Why is it that just recently i seem to be coming across as quite bossy, quite leader ishh. we're all ment to be a group "/
good chapters thoughh.. although you do realize its my turn now...?

Yay! new chapter ^_^ i can work on mine now. It shall be posted ASAP XD

I liked the chapter ^_^ its really well written. LOTS of song mentions :P they're either REALLY short or time is going REALLY fast XD
i wanna know what Gaurdian's plan is

WHO LIKES IT :) <3

It's good!
But confusing :\
I dont get it... I thought everyone had ran from the house?
BUT YAYS FOR DAIKON AND RAVEN ON THEIR NEW FOUND GAYDOM if gaydom is a word :S XD

AHHHH! my chapter will be up by tonight.
i swear!

Awesome!

i would just like to comment on guardians chapter
im already dea, immortal remember
so i dont need a heart to 'live' so in other words nice try but im still alive
:)
updating soon :)

Bravo Bravo.. well done mr p. tis great.. i love it :)

ten outta ten all the way., was great

righto. i should have read chapt 13 ages ago. my turn now. am i right? Alex if it is imma need some help.. not as much ass ginge did though :) good chapters though

I LOVED IT!!!
That chapter was amazing! well done Lara!
All credit goes to you :P

cant believe it took so long! and i cant believe you lost your whole fight scene!
you better write a new one and fast as i am NOT waiting that long for an update again.
It was good, may wanna extend it abit though and work on abit of everything, such as Guardians feelings, and alittle more description of the environment might help too.
But other than that it was awesome