Paperthin - Comments

Wow. I really really really like this! I thought I wasn't going to like it so much because the first paragraph had monotonous looking sentences, but it sure ended differently. I love how you ended it openly, but I'd like to believe she didn't leave without her "self"

Woah. That was fantastic. Captivating and beautifully written. The words flowed and sounded great. I loved this. This is an awesome story, you are a real lovely writer. I truly enjoyed reading this.

Nod.

Intense is an amazing word for this.
I love how you let us imagine the end,
how you didn't just stop everything...but actually made us think.

Brilliant.

...whoa. intense.
bravo, darling. this was very intriguing :D

i liked it.
very original xo

I really like what you've got. It's not a one shot is it? I subscribed.

I like the way you write.

Good job this is interesting story I can't wait to read more.

Bravo, love story ^^
You don't know what is happining till around the end and thats what I like about it, the title 'paperthin' is a perfect name for it.
YOu have a real gift ^^