My god, that was beautiful. I bawled like at baby at the end, which is good because I like it when writing makes me cry. I can't think of my favorite part, because it was all my favorite part. Excellent, excellent work :-]]]]
I realize this was written a long time ago, but it's an amazing piece of work so I felt like I had to comment. I love the story even though it made me cry and I got laughed at by my cousin.
*flail* IT WAS AMAZING. Very depressing, and I think my computer applications class thinks I just read about one of my family members dying due to my facial expression, and now they probably think I'm a little sick because I'm smiling. So you've managed to confuse 32 people and make one of them very happy. =] *applaud*
Oy, I really shouldn't have read this on my period. Shouldn't have shared that either but oh well. You've made me cry, and my dad already thinks I'm insane. You are a brilliant writer, some day I hope to read published works of yours. Pure bliss.
the story sounds really good. I cant wait to see what happens. It was kind of confusing at first though that they had the same names as in your other story.