I Take Back Everything - Comments

Awwwww.... this was so sweet. I love how evrything was sweet and gentlte.
and i love the tree (:

I just read the whole series thing for this.
I cries so many times it not even funny. ;x

update soooon (:
im hooked lol

The best part of this, to me, was that you completely anticipated the things I wrote in last night's comment to part IV. You anticipated them months before I made them and answered them already. Now that is some kind of time-travel mojo and I am suitably impressed

What a sweet and wonderful reunion and how perfectly you tied up the loose ends. Well, all except for my poor Mikey, but I'll forgive you (for now ;)) because this story was really not about him. This was the reunion to which it had all been leading. And how incredibly satisfying a resolution it is. *happy sigh*

Five little words. That’s all that was said, but it was enough to make the hearts belonging to two brothers bleed and swell and break, all at the same time.

Isn't it amazing how one small sentence can change so many lives?

“You never do,” Mikey whispered, watching as Frank disappeared

But this line -- an obvious echo of what he said back in part II -- just about broke my heart. Find a man for this poor boy, please.

When Frank begins trying to make sense of what happened at the part was when I began to be mind-boggled. Like I said, you absolutely foresaw everything I would say and saw the same things. It amazes me.

He remembered the look on Gerard’s face when he first walked into the bar, how the expression that he wore was everything he had hoped for.

Because that part of the plan was brilliant.

Frank remembered their moment on the balcony, and felt incredibly proud of himself for handling himself the way he did.

And I was proud of him, too.

He ran a hand through his hair and sighed, trying to pinpoint exactly where his plan had gone wrong. Unfortunately for Frank, it was a bit hard to unravel the next few parts of the evening. On normal circumstances, Frank had no trouble recalling exact details of any random event. Frank had a very photographic memory; except for the rare occasions where he decided to drink himself into oblivion, much like tonight.

And this is exactly what I said! When he fell into the base emotions, enjoying Gerard's pain, and started getting drunk, that's when everything went to hell. Exactly like I said.

“Stupid boy,” Frank muttered about himself,

I agree with this, too. *giggle*

The lessons Frank had taught him on this particular night were cruel, but Gerard wasn’t mad. He couldn’t be, because Gerard knew that he deserved every bit of the loneliness and heartache that he was currently feeling.

This is completely true. Gerard caused the whole mess and he owes both Frank and Mikey big time.

He’d never felt more empty, more broken, than that moment where he witnessed his Frank kissing someone else.

And how does he think that he's made Frank feel when he's been kissing her?

Too much had happened at once, that Gerard felt like he was going to pass out if he didn’t get the hell out of that hotel at that very instant. He didn’t have the strength to confront Mikey about going for Frank so soon after everything had happened between them; but not simply because Gerard was jealous. Sure, he was plenty pissed off at his little brother for pursuing Frank, but it was mainly the fact that Mikey had gone after Frank, knowing that Frank’s heart was bruised and broken, and in no shape whatsoever to grasp such strong feelings from anyone - especially from his best friend.

Confront Mikey?! Seriously, Gerard? I don't think you're in any position to take the moral high-ground in confronting anybody. :roll:

It was the path that Gerard had followed just the night before, because even though Frank had given him his ring back, this was the one place that he felt that Frank was still his. It was the one place where he wanted to be, the one place where he was sure that he could be with Frank once again, even if it was only in his memories.

That is just an amazing paragraph. Beautiful.

clinging to their precious memories of the only time either man felt alive.

I'm going to have to stop quoting things just because the wording is gorgeous or I'll run over a page. I can't help it, though. It's poetry.

his big brown boots that clashed fabulously with his nice black suit

hee hee :lmfao

He kept his eyes shut, for if this was a dream, he didn’t want it to go away just yet.

Awwwwwww!

“Because this is the only place where I can ignore the awful mistake that I made by letting you go, Frank. This is the only place where I can still pretend that you’re mine,” Gerard admitted, staring deep in Frank’s eyes as he said his next few words. “I don’t want to pretend anymore.”

This paragraph wraps up the entire series like a gift. A gift that was as much fun to open by reading it as it is to have it forever in my memory.

It was suddenly clear to both Frank and Gerard, that no matter where they were, the path that either man happened to be walking along was always toward each other.

And this... This paragraph is like the beautiful, sparkly bow that somehow makes the whole gift even more irresistible. *bissfully happy, contented sigh*

God I fucking love this and all the other one-shots! You're such an amazing author, you're able to describe things so eloquently yet simply and make your readers feel emotions that they've felt before for your characters. Amazing, simply amazing...

God I fucking love this and all the other one-shots! You're such an amazing author, you're able to describe things so eloquently yet simply and make your readers feel emotions that they've felt before for your characters. Amazing, simply amazing...

God I fucking love this and all the other one-shots! You're such an amazing author, you're able to describe things so eloquently yet simply and make your readers feel emotions that they've felt before for your characters. Amazing, simply amazing...

This is the only place where I can still pretend that you’re mine,” Gerard admitted, staring deep in Frank’s eyes as he said his next few words. “I don’t want to pretend anymore.”

That is my favorite line that I have ever read on Mibba after my time of being a mibbian.

It was more then just beautiful. It was so emotional. I cried while reading this chain of one shots and I have to say that these are one of my favorites because they aren't made good because of the amount of 'Ferard boy-sex' in it. It's good because it's beautifully written, it holds so much emotion and you can actually feel what the characters are feeling.


Also the way the kiss toward the end of this made me smile a bit.

I love how Gerard was knocked back down to earth, I love how Frankie went about doing this. I thought the whole scenario was cute in a unique kind of way... like if it were anyone else it would have been rotten rude and self-centered but somehow in a very unexplainable kind of way this fits soo much.

I simply adore your writing and the way you've structured this story.

I can't wait for Part Two. Until then I'll be waiting very eagerly n.n.

Synyster.

P.S. Happy holidays :]

Very sweet one shot with the two of them :) They belong together. I knew they were going to end up together at the park. It was predestined, and they should stay together. Period.

i cannot contain myself
my little frerard lovin heart is about to burst into a million frerard babies and rainbows :D :D :D :D

i think i love you. seriously lol

this is just perfect. really. its like the definition of perfection. [:

“I don’t want to pretend anymore.” <333

-a

I LOVE IT!!
I got so excited when I read your comment :D
Thanks for that by the way. I really like how you pointed out that it seems as if they are literally meant for each other and no one else.
I cant wait for the final follow-up.
<3

That was sooo amazing!!!

I can't wait for the next part!!!!

Argh, I need to read the end.
I love this story! I feel so sorry for Mikey. I could practically hear his heart tearing in two and this isn't even real!
Gah, next part soon please!
Xo

i would write a whole long comment like the other readers,
but i don't have a space bar.
Currently i am using the on-screen keyboard until my fiancee' decides
to go out and get me another one.
It just took me 15 minutes to type that whole thing.

Anyways back to the comment.
It was amazing, left me completely speechless.
I was in AWH the whole time i was reading it.
More soon please?

this bit was truly beautiful. as soon as i saw your comment i was overwhelmed with the flood of memories of the previous pieces and all the while reading this one my emotions were going crazy.

i kind of liked how you put that small 'i'm in love with my best friend' bit in there between mikey and frank. it's true though, at some point or another you'll fall for your best friend, it's human nature, it happens and it's okay.

my favorite was the overall sense that gerard and frank found each other when they were trying to be alone, to think about everything. it was that slap in the face, hey, i love him, we're meant to be together because at our lowest moments we're together, here and now. i think that made sense...if not, sorry. :D

i love, with that last line, that you leave us with that sense of hope that they'll get their happily-ever-after, but you still give the notion that it won't be easy for them, but if that's what they want, they're going to do it, they're going to make it. mostly because if you truly love someone, you truly want to be with them, you'll do whatever it takes because that happiness, that completion, those feelings they give you, nothing else will matter.

:cheese:
Oh my Gawdd!
I loved it.


I seriously cried at the end of it I was so happy.
And the way they found eachother in the park... so cute!

Well wasn't this just a sack of cuddly kittens...

*applauds* you are totally awesome. Like, I read this and I was like:"aw" and I was so entranced by this! I saw that you added it and I just had to read the previous installment because I honestly forgot that I had already read it. It wasn't until the last few lines that I was like:"wait! I remember this..."

Anyways, when I read this I could feel so much emotion. I'm so friggin glad Gerard ditched the extra baggage he was carrying around, if you know what I mean. I was skeptical at first, even though you and I had already gone over the game plan on MSN a few times.

You never cease to amaze me.

Am I spelling all this shit right? Meep.

:crazy:

Hey thanks for telling me about this.
You did a fantastic job!
Can't wait for the next part.
:]

Awwweee, Lizzie! You are a Goddess of fan fiction. This whole series has been so fantastic. This chapter/sequal was no exception. :) I really cannot believe your talent. To write so beautifully, describing every single emotion and action... Something so interesting.

I love how Frank was so confused.. So drunk. And after the lovely back-bit of information from the previous story, it just gets everyone thinking. That Mikey was confessing the love he had for Frankie for so long, with his brother watching, and for Frank to reply with, 'I love you too, Gee...' It's too breath taking. Just like Matthew Leone., I always knew that Mikey had a thing for him, but for Frank to be so confused afterwards, and during, and so surprised. Eager to get away.

And how they ended up in the same place, Frank and Gee. For Frank to think it was all just a sweet dream. How the ending of the particular chapter fed us with them holding each other close, kissing, saying that they should be done with pretending to have each other. I mean, it's definitely something different. There are so many people that are like, 'Omfg, Lyn-Z sucks twazzle', but you don't fan girl over anything. It's just simply a thing that imaginatively states how the two men might really feel, something that could happen in a real life situation.

I don't know.. I might not even be making sense. And I don't think my spell check is working. :/ But I love you. <3 Your stories are greater than anything else I have ever read, including actual published books, which I have read quite a lot of.

Fin.

woohoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay they are together and poor mikey