This Was a Therapeutic Chain of Events - Comments

  • AliceBlack

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    Very cute. I loved the last line. It made me laugh so hard. I felt bad for his shirt when it happened and that just made the tension and mood relax XD
    September 6th, 2009 at 01:11am
  • Miss Harajuku

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    I just read my first PatD fanfic! aren't you proud of me? It was a little too cute for my taste but it ended just the way I like them cute yet funny, puts a smile on your face! YAY!
    January 13th, 2009 at 01:47am
  • merance

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    Whoa, you must be a popular writer, Logan!
    Remind me to read some of your stories...
    Send me a PM. ;]
    ANYWAY.

    I just wanted to say that shine like millions. and I really enjoyed this story - we thought it was heartbreaking with Ryan's ex and how Brendon tried to help him.
    The way Ryan ruined Brendon's shirt was also really heartbreaking!
    ...oh shit, I just realised, I'm not meant to be reviewing your story, just commenting.
    BUT I CAN'T HELPPP IT!

    Haha, I'll cut it short... it was a beautiful story, and I particularly loved the last line.
    Well done, and I hope you'll enter another of my contests, because you are a great writer. :D
    January 4th, 2009 at 02:05am
  • Trash Hologram.

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    If there's one story to risk your life to read (I mean that quite literally. I'm risking my social life here.) it's this one.
    It's amazing (stamped with LOGAN all over it) but it's good none the less.
    I like how you used the required line. Much different than how I'm using it.
    aw Annaface I loves you :D
    December 14th, 2008 at 05:17pm
  • pretty monsters

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    If there's one story to risk your life to read (I mean that quite literally. I'm risking my social life here.) it's this one.
    It's amazing (stamped with LOGAN all over it) but it's good none the less.
    I like how you used the required line. Much different than how I'm using it.
    December 14th, 2008 at 05:50am
  • iPanic

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    Aw, how cute!!
    I love this, it's really good.
    :D
    December 11th, 2008 at 03:04am
  • mrs. nog.

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    Duuude! I literally went "Awwwwwww" when I read this. :] Makes me all smiley and stuff.
    December 10th, 2008 at 07:04pm
  • Cobweb.

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    This was good! Really, really, good, and I dislike PATD fanfiction usually. I am trying to come up with something for the same contest and nothing like this has popped up in my head. I think that you used the like perfectly, an every component of the one shot came together nicely. Good job!
    :arms:
    December 10th, 2008 at 02:57am
  • alex suarez.

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    ^ ^
    I agree with them!
    Love it!
    December 9th, 2008 at 09:03am
  • escape this fate

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    aaawwww super cute!!!! I agree, you should continue!!! Comment me if you do
    December 9th, 2008 at 07:19am
  • reinventheart

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    i love this so much!
    its cute.
    i think you should continue this.
    =]]
    if you decide to,
    message me or comment my profile!
    =]]
    December 9th, 2008 at 07:10am