Love Versus Lust - Comments

loved it as always!!!!!! :)
i loved it when zacky pushed her into the pool oh so swiftly haha
i can't wait for more <3
michele

~Ha, love the song references. Lips of Deceit....I lurve that song.
Two Weeks...omg All That Remains kicks so much ass. xD
Onto the actual chapter; it was awesome. Loved how you described Trina's maternal side aww lol.
Ha Zack was so horny.
MORE!
xD

I loved the update! I loved the stuff at the pool. Those boys are so funny! I actually had to go "Awww" a couple times at Johnny being like a little kid. It was cute! I loved when Brian and Johnny were trying to drown Jimmy. It was just a funny image in my head. And Jimmy burning his feet. Haha, I could totally see him doing that! I love the way they all joked around. And Cat's maternal instincts are adorable. I can totally relate to that and would probably be the same way with those boys! Haha.

But seriously, the tension between Matt and Cat is driving me insane! I'm so torn because Zacky's so freakin' good to her, but then the tension with Matt... I just don't know what to think anymore! haha.

I dunno why you were not happy with that sex scene. Maybe it's because I would never be able to write one to save my life, but I thought it was very well done. I thought it was very well written.

I loved the update and I can't wait for more!

The sex scene was fabulous, so you should be more than pleased with it. Plus, the long wait was totally worth it because I loved it entirely and I'm sure a bunch of other people did as well.
I find it extremely amusing when I envision Jimmy running across the pool with no shoes on, burning his feet. It's just a really fun picture in my mind, ahahaha.
Can't wait for more, love! <33

I had never planned to tell him about that... **Explicit Sexual Content**
that line in the summary made me tought it was actually going to be with Matt ^^"
but anyway, that was a great update :), really!

ok, dont expect me to write as much as Juila ^^^
i think my hand would shrivel up and die
and im not even kidding...

ok, before i forget, Paybacks a bitch reminded me oh so much of scrubs, so i got the link incase you dont know what i was talking about
Payback

ok, second, MY SUBSCIPTION DIDNT TELL ME IT WAS UPDATED!
stupid computer, internet shit

ok, finally, the update
WHY ARENT YOU HAPPY WITH IT??
it was fantastic!
God, the whole pool scene made me laugh
Jimmy and Brian acting like children, Johnny being a suckup to Cat, Matt and his alluring ways, and cute Zacky, being the adorable bf he is!
XD
though, i would listen to Jimmy if he complained about sunburn for days
XD
im just that weird
but, i digress

Thanks so much for updating!
im so god damn sick of work, having worked 3 days in a row, and again tomorrow, and this update made my day that much better.
well, my night really...
XD
but i loved it as usual!
your my hero!

Alright... *cracks fingers* EPIC COMMENT TIME! hahaha

So, thank you for posting, first of all, because it actually did make me feel better to read something of yours. =] I desperately needed the distraction after the day I had and for sucking at Halo 3. =/

So I loved how Cat was wandering around the hotel room, completely bored. Reminded me of when I was in San Jose and stuck in the hotel room with nothing to do. It's the worst feeling. But I'm glad she put use to that pool! That's always a good thing to use. It always feels amazing to sunbathe. =]

“You didn’t want to be rude? So does that mean if some random girl wants to suck my cock, I can let her, because I’m well mannered?” That was so funny. I laughed so hard at that because it's actually a plausible arguement. HAHAHA. God, their conversations are the best. I believe one of the boys mentioned Zacky having an elephant dick to reach her in their postion and I nearly died. HAHAHA. God, that was so funny.

I loved that she's all maternal with the guys though. It proves that she really cares about them, you know? I enjoy that she's concerned with people drowning Johnny. It seems that he would be an easy target because he's tiny. hahaha. And poor Jimmy, burning his poor little feeties on the hot pavement! hahaha. Seems like something he would do though.

But gah! The tension between her and Matt is killing me! I'm like screaming at her to stop it but then thinking about how hot it would be if they actually did hook up, you know? God, it's a double edged sword. =/ But I hate that she's got this attraction to him when she's got someone as wonderful as Zacky! But I'm waiting for the shit to hit the fan with that one! I'm sure that over time, things will occur and when they do, I shall be ready and waiting for them.

Now, I don't know why you're not 100% satisfied with the sex in this update! I thought it worked out well. At first, they were definitely messing around with each other with nothing else in mind but amazing sex but then when it actually came down to it, there was more of a connection between them than just "Oh give it to me baby". I thought it was good that it went from animalistic type foreplay to actually displaying their affections for one another. =] I thought it worked very well! Stop with the not 100% crap before I walk my ass to Austrailia to dropkick you! haha. I'll do it!

So, all in all, I loved this update but I'm sure you already knew that. =] I look forward to more of this story. I'm waiting for shit to hit a fan so I can cheer about fictional drama. (I know, I'm a sad person... hahaha)

Good job Luigi! You made Team Awesome proud! =]

This is really good! I can't wait for the next update. :D
I'm definitely subscribing!

oooh, sexy time!

That was really hot.
Loved it a lot.

I love your story *Subscibes*
Can't wait till the next update

I want Matt in the worst way....

I want some nudity, spanking, and very heavy petting...

Why must he be so damn pretty?

You make being in his head fun... :)

~This is amazinggg. I love how you started it with that scene ahaha. Man moreee! :)

amazing story, sooo fricken addicting, so more more more!

*subscribes*

damn naughty matt, lol

-starts singing and dancing- I love this story oh so very much.

It's true, though. The story keeps getting better.
And I do think Matt needs to get laid and I think Zack should finally get some! It's been too long, ahaha.

I loved the update! I really do like it when you write in Matt's POV. You do a wonderful job at it and it lets us know what's going on when Cat's not around. That and it also lets us know that he wants her just as much as she seems to want him. I love what you've got going and can't wait for more!

Thank you for updating!
I like Matt's POV. It helps make the story more exciting.

Merry Christmas.
xx

Your story tears me apart I swear.
I love Zacky but I like Matt too.
I would want Zacky and her to break up cause I want Zacky in my head anyways, but then he's gonna have a broken heart.
I want Matt to hook up with her, but ughhh I lost my train of thought.
I like the update. That's what I wanted to say.
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Ok!
I READ THEM BOTH!
PARTY!
XD
sorry!
im proud!
i should be asleep, but im not!
XD
i like Matts POV
lets us in on how much they both want each other!
poor, unsuspecting Zacky
meh, he'll live!
XD
Love it my sister!
hope ya have a good chrissy (you should know how hard that was fo rme to say)
XD