One Wrong Move - Comments

xPoppinxChampagnex (100)

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i love this story.
the relationship is cute.
cant wait for more.

August 6th, 2010 at 04:33pm

Mykayla! (100)

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I like this story. It's so cute.
Update soon?

July 7th, 2010 at 09:20pm

rockchick (100)

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i love this story
cant wait for next update

February 28th, 2010 at 04:10am

keepersblood (100)

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Dude Totally love it. It's so awesome! :) Please update! Love, Ambs

December 29th, 2009 at 03:47am

outtahereyall (150)

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cute.

December 19th, 2009 at 10:18pm

foREVer an Angel (100)

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i missed this story so much!!!!! i loved the new update, please update soon!!!!!

December 12th, 2009 at 08:16am

Becka Vengeance (100)

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Ohhhh mmmmyyyyyy goooodddd, I missed this story! I love it sooo much, more soon pleeease?

December 11th, 2009 at 06:23am

Mad Porno Action (100)

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Aww poor thing :( I love how Brian knows what he's doing xD More when you can xxxx

December 10th, 2009 at 08:20pm

Fictional.Reality (100)

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i just caught up on all of your chapters
i love this story so much
i hope she gets better though
<3 Michele

December 10th, 2009 at 03:57pm

MsSynnieVengeance (100)

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I love this story... I was literally crying when I read what that nasty man did to that adorable girl... I cannot wait for an update

December 10th, 2009 at 10:59am

a7x babe56 (100)

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lovin this mclovin but anyway update soon this is a kickass story hehe im bad

December 2nd, 2009 at 05:30am

screamedlullaby (100)

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no update? :(

May 3rd, 2009 at 11:37pm

bloodravyn (100)

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awws

April 16th, 2009 at 01:48pm

Mad Porno Action (100)

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Aww how sweet :D Love how the guys are with her. More when you can xxxx

April 14th, 2009 at 08:12pm

We Were Young; (100)

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Great update. :D

April 13th, 2009 at 10:57pm

Diamondintheroughxx (100)

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aww i love it
matts a softie really :)
can't wait for more

April 13th, 2009 at 08:59pm

screamedlullaby (100)

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SO GOOD :)
and thanks for the thanks
i really like this
and matt is SO cute as a dad
and i love how they made the GIRLIEST teddy bears (except for the frog)
:P
update again soon, mehbeh?

April 13th, 2009 at 07:51pm

screamedlullaby (100)

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know what i think?
you should update :)

April 12th, 2009 at 05:31pm

We Were Young; (100)

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This Story is simply amazing!!

March 9th, 2009 at 07:34am

Becka Vengeance (100)

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I am in desperate need of an update. this story is absolutely incredible =]

February 20th, 2009 at 10:29pm