Move Along - Comments

Did I mention I really enjoyed the update? ^.^

:brightside: Oh hell big shit is going down! I can't believe they finally did it. When she woke up and didn't freak out I seriously thought that her and Bri would actually have a go at a relationship. Who cares about that bastard what-his-name.

Oh don't get me started on how she could just do that to Bri! Honestly woman get yourself together. If she doesn't want him I'll gladly have him!

Wow this is really epic... Man I love Lynn. :XD She freakin rocks!

My fav part:

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“You love Brian! You said so yourself! It was a total Freudian slip; you’re in love with Brian.”

Freudian slip? Angie, dude, I love your vocabulary! They way you describe things is just... Ugh- you render me speechless.

This story is the best story I have ever read on Mibba. Including originals and all that jazz. I mean it. The emotion I feel for this story is like freakishly obsessed, but I don't care because I enjoy it so much! I love every minor detail about it.

You ought to be very proud of yourself darling. You're a bloody great, big, bright, shiny, diamond in the rough. :snob

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Lol. Ah bless. UPDATE SOON hehe

Amazing chapter!
She has to get with Brian! It's nessacary. Very very nessacary.
So do it ap!

:cute:

Take the risk, take the fucking goddamn risk and dump Marcus' sorry ass!
The sex scene was great, I don't know why you thoguth it sucks! :)
I loved the update XD and I can't wait for more! and please just make Zacky beat Marcus with a baseball bat or something ^^"

Take the risk! Take the god damned risk! Damn! Seriously, i think i was holding my breath throughout the whole chapter. Holy shit, that was amazing, but i really want to slap Angel for not realising that she should dump that idiot. Plus, that sex scene was one of the best i've ever read, and that includes by published authors, too. You should be damn proud of that chapter! Man, i have to wait until July 7th to read the last chapter? Fuck, that's ages away! Fantastic as usual, can not wait for the next chapter. If she doesn't get with Brian i'm gonna blow her fictional brains out!

OMG! they had sex... finally!! and she is sooo stupid ahh he wants to be with her.. god damn it!!!

That was totally amazing! I cannot wait until the 7th! Angel NEEDS to pick Bri, I seriously feel like I may go on a killing rampage if she doesn't. They love each other and belong together, Angel knows it too. She's just a bit slow. lol. It's true and like Chace said above, how the fuck can she still consider Marcus?!?!?! I really wanna kill any and everybody named Marcus right now. He's a selfish ass. And that prick deserves to die and suffer in hell. He just sweet talks her everytime after they fight so he can hopefully get laid. That fucker even calls sweet little Evie a brat. Even Evie knows Marcus is a bad guy, and she knows Brian and Angel should be together. They belong together, all of them, Brian, Angel and Evie. With Zacky and Lynn and everyone else close by. By the way, you're sex scene was awesome! It's about time she got laid, especially with Brian. Shouldn't that be a dead giveaway to away to Angel she belongs with Bri. She even stopped him from using a condom! She needs to walk out back tell Bri she's sorry and she loves him and she wants to be with him forever and ever, and kiss him!!!
Anyways awesome update!
Please update again soon!

I have to tell you that I am seriously in love with this story!
That last chapter was so hot its inspired me to go write more of my Brian story lol!
Cannot wait for the next update!
xoxo

Fucking hell woman! You write that amazing sex scene, and it seems as though Angel knows what she wants, I mean she was the one who didn't even want to use a condom for Christ's sake! And then you make her treat Bri like poop?! She is pissing me off and fuck! How can someone sleep with someone with her kind of history and all that jizz and still have to think about if they are in love with that person?! AND HOW IN THE FUCK can she even still consider Marcus!?
I don't know, but this chapter has left me feeling bittersweet, and the way she is thinking is making me mad. GAH! I love this story and everything, but why does this character have to be so hard headed?! xD lol.
I can't WAIT for the last chapter, and I hope to GOD that Angel doesn't pick Marcus. It will be like 'Dirty Little Secret' all over again, and I'm not sure if I can handle reading about Marcus and Angels' relationship. *gags*
But anyway sweets, sorry for the novel!
Update soon! ^_^
Please and thanks!

Dude. For your second sex scene. That was freakin beast.
Not only did it take up half the chapter, but it wasn't awkward, and it was
at the right time (even though we've all been waiting for this moment forever!!!).
I'm so glad it finally happend. But with Angel's personality, I knew she'd still think about being with Marcus, which is what I hate about her! Like when they woke up, she just tried to ignore it...
grr
But sadly, it's what makes her, her. And what makes this story the way it is. Which is good. She gets on my nerves sometimes, but I wouldn't have her any other way.
Haha if I were Brian I woulda given up a long time ago out of sheer frustration. Jesus H. Christ.
Anyway, since this whole part of the series was about them getting together, it's about time that happened. I can't wait for the last chapter and the next sequel. Keep up the good work.
Damn that was a long comment. My bad. =)

It finally happens and then she ruins it!
Ugh, I'm so fed up with her honestly...

so I couldn't sleep so I came on to read the end!!
hella loved it babes!!!!!!!!!
but I'm gonna sleep now!!
lol I love you!!

my God, how much longer are you going to make her choose the wrong guy?!
it's getting (a little) annoying to be honest, sorry...

why is it that she's so dead set against realizing what she really wants and needs? she's not stupid, we all know that, but WHY?
if she chooses marcus one more time after this, I'm going to blow a fuse, seriously. it kinda sucks...

The reactions:

THEIR KISSING!....

reading... im getting antsy...

lol

omg...

om-... AH! hehe!

AHHHHHHH! DIRTY!

...i think i need a new pair of panties...

OHMYFUCKINGGOD ANGELYOUBITCH!

TAKE THE RISK YOU COLD HEARTED PUTA!

haha... idk if i like this chapter- it was a really good build up... BUT SHE DIDNT END UP WITH BRIAN! AHHHHHH!!!

damn. if theres going to be a sequel its cus they wont get together -_-
ima be upset if they dont....lol

Wow, my eye's hurt from staying focused on the computer screen, I hope her and Marcus finally break up, it's been due for too long.

OMG!! i wish she would just break up with marcus already and get with bri!!! great update and more soon please!!! :D

Awww..
Wow. marcus is a DICKKK!!
Poor Angel.
I'm so happy Bri is there for her.
I really hope they freaking get together!!!
I love this babes.
You must write more pronto :D

Ddue, this totally shows that Bri's gonna do something!
O_O
What is it?!?!?

update please!!!! i love it soo far....=]