April 9th, 2009 at 11:06am
Okay so one of the few good Arctic Monkeys songs was the title lyric. Which could only mean good things from the chapter! (:
I loved the others all wondering what was going on. All of them are really out of the loop and are very unknowing as to what's going on between Oli and Jez. I like that you've kept them all in the dark, it adds a touch of mystery, and it keeps Oli and Jez isolated, like they can only discuss it with each other, or with themselves mentally. their eyes glazed over whilst their minds were awake with thoughts chasing each other around their brains. I loveee that line, they are chasing each other, they just don't seem to realise it.
I liked how Jez's mood was lifted at the thought of going home. She seemed to become chipper really quickly, as if something snapped inside her and she just decided that the best way to get through it was to grin and bear it. The thought of home and Alex fuelled it all, which makes me feel a bit sorry for Oli, especially at the end when it's bombs away and he drops his confession of undying love. Like the reason Jez was happy, was thinking of seeing Alex again, and you have to feel sympathy for Oli, because it's not him that makes her happy.
DITCH TURNER JEZ. He's overrated and shizz. (:
But yes, wonderful update.
Still loving this, update soon xx