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  • Robin Sparkles

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    I really like how it's personal, and the diary form makes it all the more interesting.

    I wonder what's going to happen to her mother though. Will we be seeing more of her? Or of her dad?

    Update soon. :]
    November 30th, 2007 at 10:19pm
  • the surgeon.

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    That was really interesting to read, Snekle. You're a good writer. I loved it when you said 'Where are my eggs?'
    I thought that meant like, where's the love? That sort of thing.
    It was awesome. =]
    October 6th, 2007 at 10:45pm
  • sunflowers.

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    sneki you're a awesome writer. I like how it was written informally and as a diary. It made it feel more personal.

    write more Nyam
    September 12th, 2007 at 01:31am
  • Lykwoah

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    I think it's pretty cool, but I find it kind of hard to read what it says....
    maybe it's just me 8]]
    September 12th, 2007 at 01:26am
  • mankind's last hope?

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    that was quite enjoyable to read! yes fuck mum and the psych! your english is pretty decent from what i've read.
    September 12th, 2007 at 01:21am
  • fall-from-a-star

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    Very good. Update soon, please!
    Clap Dance Clap Dance

    i ♥
    September 12th, 2007 at 01:02am
  • Sneki.

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    -dreams-

    Yeah, that would be great, Die. Thanks for encouraging me. :]

    :hug:
    September 12th, 2007 at 12:35am
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    I can see you becoming a better Author if you continue, Sneki...I see it now... SNEKI...THE BEST AUTHOR. *dreams*

    Keep writing!
    September 11th, 2007 at 10:05pm
  • Sneki.

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    Thank you. ^_^
    September 7th, 2007 at 07:03pm
  • skyjogger

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    Wow, I like it.
    September 7th, 2007 at 04:11am
  • Fueled By Dana

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    Very good. Update soon, please!
    June 4th, 2007 at 04:31pm
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