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i_heart_jonas (100)

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i know its got poor structure. my writing is getting a little better.
i wrote this like forever ago, and never fixed it. it will be ok.

March 5th, 2009 at 01:54am
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LakeEffectKid:
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This story has poor structure. There needs to be a new paragraph for every new person that speaks.
I agree, but I like the story more so I don't care, but honestly that was great.
I also agree but it is a good story so far. more soon? btw lakeeffectkid has a cool pic of fob :]

March 5th, 2009 at 12:35am
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This story has poor structure. There needs to be a new paragraph for every new person that speaks.
I agree, but I like the story more so I don't care, but honestly that was great.

December 31st, 2008 at 08:22am
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This story has poor structure. There needs to be a new paragraph for every new person that speaks.

December 15th, 2008 at 04:07am

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