Everything Happens for a Reason - Comments

Your writing style is the best. This story is unique and I am so hooked on the characters. It is amazing if you will continue to write because you are so talented. I would like to Inform you that NoveIStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html

Ohhh...I like it more more more!!

Its a good start to you're first story the only thing I would say is that it's feel quite fast and rushed. Maybe if you take a bit more time describing things it gets the ready more involved and sets the scenes better.
Anywho, well done, you should keep going.

aww thats cute pm me when there is more

I like it. pm me when there is more

its good tell me when theres more

This is my first story so tell me waht you think.