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  • jewellboney

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    Your writing style is the best. This story is unique and I am so hooked on the characters. It is amazing if you will continue to write because you are so talented. I would like to Inform you that NoveIStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html
    April 13th, 2021 at 06:06am
  • Jamie Glynn;

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    Ohhh...I like it more more more!!
    July 15th, 2007 at 12:40am
  • Ridele

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    Its a good start to you're first story the only thing I would say is that it's feel quite fast and rushed. Maybe if you take a bit more time describing things it gets the ready more involved and sets the scenes better.
    Anywho, well done, you should keep going.
    June 6th, 2007 at 07:53pm
  • Kerplunk325

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    aww thats cute pm me when there is more
    January 10th, 2007 at 09:51pm
  • mcali187

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    I like it. pm me when there is more
    January 9th, 2007 at 06:25am
  • Kerplunk325

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    its good tell me when theres more
    December 26th, 2006 at 02:44am
  • GreenDay_GurL23

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    This is my first story so tell me waht you think.
    December 24th, 2006 at 07:12pm
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