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  • Snufflebean

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    I kinda love this story.
    And I almost cried.
    Keep it up.
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    June 29th, 2007 at 04:58am
  • glasgow_lass

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    lol I kind of accidentally made Louisa a little more bitchy than she would be but i don't think she'll feature much after that chapter so it doesn't really matter.

    Is the background info okay for everyone? I sometimes forget that I know loads of history about the characters that you guys don't. Tell me if something doesn't make sense or seems a bit strange. It's hard to tell these things when you're so involved in a story, an outside eye helps sometimes.

    Glad you're all enjoying it!
    June 27th, 2007 at 11:27pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    Who had bitchmix for breakfast then, Lousia??
    Keep this coming, I really like it :D:D
    June 27th, 2007 at 08:43pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    Have a nice long chat...
    Keep this coming, I love it :D:D
    June 26th, 2007 at 08:38pm
  • Snufflebean

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    I really, really like this story.
    :]
    June 26th, 2007 at 06:05pm
  • glasgow_lass

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    Thanks so much for all your comments, they really help spur me on writting :D
    June 21st, 2007 at 07:52pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    Those last few chapters were beautifully written for so sad a period. It was quite amazing really at how sensitively you wrote, but still kept the attitude. Well done.
    Keep this coming, it's an amazing story.
    June 21st, 2007 at 05:15pm
  • Phantasmagoria

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    I like it xD
    June 21st, 2007 at 04:32pm
  • glasgow_lass

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    thanks, its always nice to get a new reader who likes to comment :)
    June 21st, 2007 at 03:03pm
  • Idee Fixe.

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    xD i like this *nods* really, it's very interesting

    keep the updates comming :D i'll be waiting for the next chapter
    June 21st, 2007 at 12:50pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    she's gonna go all emo and kill herself cos Chris will be in a coma and she'll blame herself...
    keep this coming, i wanna see how it pans out :D:D
    June 14th, 2007 at 06:21pm
  • glasgow_lass

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    I love this!
    I hate it when I cant think of a comment that describes how much I love a story!
    xoxo
    Aww thanks :) thats so sweet
    June 14th, 2007 at 03:10pm
  • SamSevenfold

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    I love this!
    I hate it when I cant think of a comment that describes how much I love a story!
    xoxo
    June 14th, 2007 at 03:08pm
  • glasgow_lass

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    It's getting really difficult to write. I know where I'm going it's just getting there that's hard.

    It should be kicking off a bit soon and MCR will make more of an appearance.
    June 12th, 2007 at 04:38pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    Keep this coming, I'm intrigued.
    June 12th, 2007 at 04:27pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    she doesn't know 'cos they don't talk!!
    this is great, keep it coming please :D:D
    June 6th, 2007 at 10:25am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    Ruby's remarkably like my sister... amazingly stupid when it comes to people and advice.
    Of course we read and reply fast - this story's awesome!! Keep it coming :D:D
    June 5th, 2007 at 09:20pm
  • glasgow_lass

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    wow you guys read and reply fast! This is all I have written up so far, thought I have the whole story planned out. I'm hoping to update as fast as I can :)
    June 4th, 2007 at 09:40pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    Clap this is promising - it's certainly different.
    keep this coming, I like it.
    June 4th, 2007 at 09:38pm
  • umecenter

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    this is really good keep going
    June 4th, 2007 at 09:37pm
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