Chin Up Love - Comments

@ CourageKeeper
thanks for reading, have you read my other Oli story its called 'If we leave love'

the ending is adorable xD

This was such a good story. I'm glad I took the time to read it all :D

absolutley loved the story like i said ur an amazing writer!

awww wow that was super sweet c:
i loooooooooove the ending.

eighteen: Hating that her mom said that. Wondering what's Oli going to think? Can't wait.

seventeen: Loved the party scene. Was wondering if they had the same outfits on? Reason is because there's only one that's linked. Wondering what her revenge is going to be?

sixteen: The last part was hilarious, as well as the drunken truth or dare game. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait.

fifteen: Greatness. It's 12:45 am here; so if my comments seem short, reasons are that i'm finally getting tired. Anyways, wondering what's to happen next? Can't wait.

fourteen: Pure awesomeness. Loved everything about it. Glad to see that Bret got a part in this one. Wondering what's going to happen in her last two classes and at home? Can't wait to read and find out.

thirteen: Let's see...hating her mom, her "friends", and her boyfriend (who by the way; I noticed hasn't really had any parts in the story, hoping he has one in the next chapter). Wondering what's going to happen at school now? Can't wait to read and find out.

tweleve: This is my favorite chapter; the restlessness of the two, the 'climbing a tree and being prince charming' line and part. Hoping that she's able to get him out before her parents do. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

eleven: Did I forget to mention that i hate her friends? Wondering what's going to happen at school? Can't wait to read.

ten: Yeah, she's becoming a teenager now; meaning she's not listening or caring about what her mother thinks. Wondering what's going to happen while in the field? Can't wait to read it.

nine: The only advice I have is keep making the chapters longer; yet have a couple of fillers and cliffys once in a while. Loved the entire chapter. Wondering what's to happen now? Can't wait.

eight: Awesome descriptions of his friends and their outfits. Loved the 'a guys got to look good/ a girl has to look good' part. Wondering what's to happen next? Can't wait.

seven: Yeah, I'd read it; just tell me the name and you've got more comments for it coming your way. Anyways, the story; pure sexiness. Loved her outfit and the line that she said before Tom walked in asking for her bags. Wondering what's going to happen on the camping trip? Can't wait to read and find out.

six: This story is PURE GENIUS! Wondering what's going to happen? Can't wait to read and find out if every lie of hers works.

five: Too short for my taste; but loved it anyhow. I'm doing this because I don't want this story deleted, but found something: {...hated it every time I kissed Bret I found myself comparing my kiss to Oli’s and always coming to the conclusion that Oli’s was better...} At the part where it says my kiss to Oli's; shouldn't it say 'his' kiss to Oli's. Just something I was wondering about. Still wondering if anyone is noticing something between the two. Can't wait to read the next one.

four: Pure cuteness. You my friend are a natural at giving descriptions and making excellent stories. Wondering what's going to happen when she gets home? Can't wait.