Needle - Comments

I loved this! I thought it was cute, somehow, even though they were bickering. It doesn't sound like a relationship that's going to last though.
I love how there's a paragraph with the word 'stupid' repeated over in it - it really shows how frustrated she is. It's something I can completely relate to cos when I'm frustrated I tend to repeat 'stupid' as well haha.
I don't like the guy in this, but I love how the girl reacts. Oh, she was gonna crunch him, all right. ~ That line was my favourite.

I loved this being a sports fan and all :tehe:

"And stupid her for falling for his stupidity." -I thought that was the most cleverest line from the whole story. At first I didn't know what was going on and I was like okay, I'm starting to get this, but in a weird way I thought the couples relationship was cute and funny.

You have the typical boyfriend who's all into sports and pays no attention to his girlfriend who's pretty fed up with it all. But, as readers we sense that the relationship was/on rocks way before this little incident. I thought the ending was very short and sweet.