It's Our Time to Shine - Comments

YESSSSSSS !!!!!
THEY KISSED !!!
So CUTE !! :D

<3

HELL YEAH!
OH MAN! THEY FINALLY KISSED!
AND IT WAS SO PERFECT!
AWHHH! :)
im so pleased :D
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now thats what im talkin about!
that was soooo cute :]]
our kiss hah makes me giggle :p

Okay, first of all, IM SORRY I HAVEN'T COMMENTED IN LIKE 3 CHAPTERS!

Could you forgive me? :]<3

Secondly, OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!

LOVE IS IN THE FUCKING SMOKE FILLED EVENING AIR!:D

I just love this chapter, even if it's toooooo short but it's all gooooooood:D:D:D:D:D!!!

A kiss, a gentle short soft sweet loving caring kiss!:D

YAY:D

And good thing here?. they somewhat know each other, not like¨, as a i've said before, girl meets rockstar, rockstar meets girl, rockstar fucks girl. and so on.

THIS IS GREAT!

Love your writing Lina, keep up the fucking amazing work!

See you in 103 days babe!<3:D

xxxxxxx. Erica Aiden

board games is the shit :D

great update :D

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heeey Lee!
u rock
i <3 board games!!!
cant he just fall on you or smthng lol
keep it up!
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omgg
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww
kissssss!!!!!!
seeeex!!!!!!!!!
omg do it LIina!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xxxx

TRUTH OR DARE?!
Oh my gosh. Bert and Lina can kiss, finally! And nobody will be any the wiser of their feelings as it's all under the disguise of a dare! ooh!
ahahaha.
I love it :)
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lmao your pics of you make me laugh.
hah sooo excited that you won $70 lucky bitch ahahahahahhh ily tho :]]

lovin it!
idk i feel like the story needs to be spiced up a bit.
im not sayin that your story has gone terrible. because you know that i am freakin INlove with ur story.
i just feel like sumthin needs to be spiced up in it or w.e ya knw!?

CONGRATULATIONS LINA!!
you look really..eh.. good!
haha, no really, awesome dude!

and the update was amazing <3

love !

hahaha wahey!
congrats for winning :D
you look awesome :P
and I loved the updateeeeeee. Oooh, if Bert and Lina would have kissed outside, Quinn could have caught them and it would have been oohh soo dramatic. However, this is not the way I want them to get together :P I know you'll have thought up something amazing.
more when you can :D
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i wonder, what is wrong with Bert, is it Kate again??
hmmmmmmm........
i wanna try ur cooking btw xD
(if i dnt die) lol

Maybe Bert's being all absent minded because he's considering how to tell lina he loves her?
: D
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Yeah, whats really wrong with Bert ? :o

awesome update :D
<3

mrs mccracken is so sweet :'))

update=amazing <3

stiiiiiiiill no kiss?
You trying to kill me, woman!?
hahaha.
I love it.
Maybe the next chapter will have some kind of sneaky kiss?
and mrs mccracken will walk in on them?
oooohhh!
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I want mooore : ))
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Looovee yoouuu linaa

hah lol i would hate myself if i bragged and i suckd now about that kinda stuff! lol

oohhh still no kissing?
:(
And you got me all excited with the new chapter ;p
xxx