Good Boys Gone Rad. - Comments

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I FWEAKIN LOVE THIS STORY XD

SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH XD
I am subscribing to this :)
Hope to hear from it soon :)
I love it
Fish-kins FTW!!! <3 :)

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Eeeeep I need to know how it ends!!! Jamie and Lee <3

Apologies for this long-overdue comment. This should have been left last night but yeah, as you know I went to sleep ridiculously early :lmfao

Anyway.

First of all, I really liked Ian's cockiness. How he's all I'm nobody's bitch when Joel walks away from him after he was all controlling to him. :tehe:

And how he thinks of Joel as small, when in reality he's probably not much shorter than Joel himself. I guess its because he always likes to feel like the "big man", and he likes being the main controller. And by referring to Joel as small and pocket-sized, he feels like he's the bigger man and feels more in control.

Ian's little soliloquy about love was very touching and how he's sort of unsure by the feeling. And it linked in very nicely with Lee's entrance.

It seems a little bit strained between Lee and Ian at first, like both of them felt slightly awkward together for some reason. :think:

Jamie's entrance was very apt and I really liked it. :tehe: It was very Jamie-esque, if that makes sense. :XD

The Jamie/Lee scene was quite touching and I feel for Lee, because Jamie's all over him and it's sort of teasing for him.

Sorry this feedback is a little shorter than usual. >_<

Snap to the above comment! ;D
And I can't wait to see what Ian does to little Joel. (;
:tehe:
<3

I well reckon Jamie and Lee should get it on!

Eventually of course....

Cristina Scabbia:

Haha. So, I'm currently sat in school writing this feedback so we'll see how far I manage to get before getting banned off the network or something :tehe: I've copied your update into a word document, I'm typing out my feedback beneath it and then I'll copy and paste once I get home. :tehe:

First of all, I really like Joel's enthusiasm and I like how you don't make his character perfect - how he skips a step and jolts a knee. I like little details like this, it makes the whole story a lot more believable. And he's kinda clumsy. That's sweet, haha. In an odd way :tehe:

You've written Joel/Ian really well. I think it's sweet that Joel kinda wants to hide his relationship with Ian, he seems like quite a self-conscious character; like he isn't good enough, and I can really empathise with him. And he's really apologetic with Ian, how he apologises for colliding with him when really, Ian doesn't mind in the slightest.

I feel so sad for Joel because he really thinks he isn't good enough for Ian, like how him and his "upstart" band are like small fishes compared to Ian and his band. He seems to think that everybody thinks the worst of him, too, when really they think anything but.

When Sean walked in on Joel and Ian...that bit was interesting. Wonder why he was so interested about Aled and I wonder why he's so attentive!

Again, I feel sorry for Joel when he says he's not good enough. It's like he wants assurance from Ian, somehow, and hearing that he is important makes him feel better about himself.

Ian is such a sweetheart.

And then, ooh Joel! What a controller! :tehe:

That bit was written incredibly well.

:yah

Loved the update. :cute:

Hmm, I can't beat that comment. ¬_¬ So I'll just quote it. Insert cheesy grin here.
Iliked loved that update. As the above comment said, he's quite shy and not all that confident. I can realte to that, I'm exactly the same. (:
<3

Haha. So, I'm currently sat in school writing this feedback so we'll see how far I manage to get before getting banned off the network or something :tehe: I've copied your update into a word document, I'm typing out my feedback beneath it and then I'll copy and paste once I get home. :tehe:

First of all, I really like Joel's enthusiasm and I like how you don't make his character perfect - how he skips a step and jolts a knee. I like little details like this, it makes the whole story a lot more believable. And he's kinda clumsy. That's sweet, haha. In an odd way :tehe:

You've written Joel/Ian really well. I think it's sweet that Joel kinda wants to hide his relationship with Ian, he seems like quite a self-conscious character; like he isn't good enough, and I can really empathise with him. And he's really apologetic with Ian, how he apologises for colliding with him when really, Ian doesn't mind in the slightest.

I feel so sad for Joel because he really thinks he isn't good enough for Ian, like how him and his "upstart" band are like small fishes compared to Ian and his band. He seems to think that everybody thinks the worst of him, too, when really they think anything but.

When Sean walked in on Joel and Ian...that bit was interesting. Wonder why he was so interested about Aled and I wonder why he's so attentive!

Again, I feel sorry for Joel when he says he's not good enough. It's like he wants assurance from Ian, somehow, and hearing that he is important makes him feel better about himself.

Ian is such a sweetheart.

And then, ooh Joel! What a controller! :tehe:

That bit was written incredibly well.

:yah

Loved the update. :cute:

ok, i have to admit i love this story. it's got so many unusual (but sitll totally awesome) pairings. seriously great work :)

I now pronounce myself and this story as man and wife,
the stories the man of course :tehe:
this is absolute genius :D

'I was surrounded each and every day by blokes who practically shoved pink signs in your face saying “GAY! GAY! I’M GAY! BE GAY! GAY!” - that probably made me laugh for about twenty minutes straight...:lmfao

Jamie and Ian is the sweetest thing in history :3

No seriously I'm in love with this..why in gods name haven't I read it before!
I'm subscribing of course :D

All you lot collaborating together is pretty much asking for a ridiculously good read

more please, i'm addicted <3
AND IT'S GOT ALED+SEAN IN IT dsfgbcsdbjk!!!!!!!!!
*cough*

it's awesome! and i'm so sorry my feedback is awful, i'm supposed to be doing some kind of coursework and not paying attention to mibba

I'll comment something useful on the next chapter xD

xxxxx

:cheese:

I'm so glad I actually got round to reading this.
Because it's so amazing.
You three are so awesome at writing it's unbelievale.

Every pairing in this is just :weird
Shay and Phil are the cutest. Joel and Ian is just a brilliant idea.
And the way Jamie describes Lee.

It's so good! :mrgreen:

OMGZ. That was cool.

I'd have never imagined Joelly and Eon as a pair!

Oooh!

Joel and Ian as a pair.
Woww!

love it; subscribing; can't wait for more :}
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HAHA omg Phil and Shay made me giggle.

It's cute, but I'd have NEVER thought of them in a slash pairing!

This is a good chapter!

can't wait to see how the story turns out!

That was an awesome update. :cute:

I love how you describe Aled as seeing "pretty colours" when he woke up, it's a lot better description than just "I woke up with a hangover." Great description there!

It's really sad how Aled knows that Sean isn't exactly the most trustworthy person in the world, and how he automatically assumes that Sean's gone to sleep with somebody else because he didn't stay with him the night before. It's like he's just grown to accept it, and thats so sad. It's like he's a character that keeps getting pushed around and he just accepts it.

"I saw Sean a few minutes ago. Coming back from ‘Prophets’ bus."

"I know," I replied. One of Lostprophets then.

"Have you two had a fight? He seemed to be getting pretty friendly with Lee last night…"

Oh. Lee. So I was right. It was someone else while I was drunk. My own fault, I guess.

It's so sad how he blames himself for Sean sleeping with other people.

And ooh, Shay/Phil? Never seen that before. It's a good pairing, too. It's nice how you've written that pairing. It's so sweet and it's like they're perfect for each other.

I loved this update.

AWWW!

I've never seen a slash with Phil!
CUUUTE

SUSIE!

That was awesome
no need to be worried at all!

:D

This story is amazing so far.

It was really interesting to read this part from the "straight guy's" point of view, and it's good to see his confusion about why Sean had just come out of Lee's bed because he was supposed to be with Aled. A lesser writer probably wouldn't have thought about mentioning that.

I really like the character of Jamie in this story. He's so sweet and it's like he doesn't know who he is any more.

The paragraph about him wanting somebody is really sad and I can empathise with the guy.

And then there was a bit of lighter writing where Ian and Stu are arguing about hair gel and jumpers :tehe:

It was also so sad that Jamie tried to ignore the fact he'd had a bit of a "gay moment", so to put it.

Awesome update.

I think you will ^_^

This was a really good update!

I feel so sorry for Jamie, being all confoosed.

I know how he feels xD

I really, really hope that I can compare to these.

*gulps*