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  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Cool update, I can't wait for the next chaoter in Syn's POV.
    January 2nd, 2009 at 01:45am
  • bloodravyn

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    he will, for a while!
    as it goes on, you'll see he has a lot to atone for.
    January 2nd, 2009 at 01:19am
  • RomanianLover

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    OMG OMG
    I liked it. The way Johnny let him know what's what at the end.
    ♥ ♥
    Is it just me or does Brian cry a lot? Oh...and I want to know what Matt sees.
    January 1st, 2009 at 07:35pm
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    YAY your so right there, I can't wait for more, I feel so sorry for them all but at the same time I don't. It's strange.
    January 1st, 2009 at 02:18pm
  • Dragonfire

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    YAY! he's back and kicking ass!!!!!
    Loved it and sorry for not commenting before now.
    PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 :D :D :D :D
    January 1st, 2009 at 04:02am
  • RomanianLover

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    Do you want me to put 3 comments cause I can, but I don't think that's what you were talking about.
    Great update. Short Shit is BACK I'm excited.
    ♥♥♥♥♥
    December 31st, 2008 at 05:53pm
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Ah, thats, cool. I like was just saying it was just my opinion on it which I hoped would help improve your writing as no one's is perfect.
    I can't wait to find out more about the phone call etc.
    December 31st, 2008 at 01:22pm
  • bloodravyn

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    i actually was going to go into a full explanation in a few chapters from brian's pov, again
    but, since i already deleted it, it doesn't really matter for right now
    December 30th, 2008 at 02:19am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Kool update, Brian kinda got what he deserved though. I feel as if this story is jumping to quickly at times. For it to suddenly go two years and only a brief reference to the phone call and the sex afterwards, I think it would of been nice to have that night as a chapter so we truly understand the reason Brian became so cold. Its just my advice though.
    December 30th, 2008 at 02:08am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    I feel so sorry for Brian but he does kinda deserve it though. But poor Johnny.
    December 26th, 2008 at 01:41am
  • RomanianLover

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    I want to hug Brian even though he's an ass I still want to hug him.
    ♥ ♥ ♥
    December 25th, 2008 at 02:07am
  • RomanianLover

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    Oh I like a lot.
    ♥ ♥ ♥
    My heart's broken though.
    December 20th, 2008 at 11:50pm
  • RomanianLover

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    Oh can't wait for this one.
    ♥♥♥♥♥
    December 18th, 2008 at 02:48am