OMG OMG I liked it. The way Johnny let him know what's what at the end. ♥ ♥ Is it just me or does Brian cry a lot? Oh...and I want to know what Matt sees.
Do you want me to put 3 comments cause I can, but I don't think that's what you were talking about. Great update. Short Shit is BACK I'm excited. ♥♥♥♥♥
Ah, thats, cool. I like was just saying it was just my opinion on it which I hoped would help improve your writing as no one's is perfect. I can't wait to find out more about the phone call etc.
i actually was going to go into a full explanation in a few chapters from brian's pov, again but, since i already deleted it, it doesn't really matter for right now
Kool update, Brian kinda got what he deserved though. I feel as if this story is jumping to quickly at times. For it to suddenly go two years and only a brief reference to the phone call and the sex afterwards, I think it would of been nice to have that night as a chapter so we truly understand the reason Brian became so cold. Its just my advice though.