Hands and Teeth - Comments

Well, this isn't exactly the type of stories I like much, but I loved how you described everything, it was so detailed. It was short though, which is good because I love it when stories are short.
Red pounced on the clouds in his vision, darkening the sky like a creeping stain... ~ I loved that line, for some reason, it just really got to me.

Okie Dokie, this comment is from the judge of the Deathfic Competition I just want to leave a quick comment on each entry. If you want any long reviews on any stories please feel free to Private Message me.

Although this one-shot was short the description of the dead corpses was the thing that got me. The way you broke them down into mere things that used to make them was amazing description. Not only that but this whole thing each line was powerful, the fact he knew death was coming and he was ready for it. Also as he reffered to the people of the country as 'her children' was very cool, it made it seem very realistic like how the protaganist would speak.
I would have preffered it being longer, but thats because I always get sad when stories end :P
Well done.

I'm surprised no-one has commented >.>

Though it's short, it's detailed and really good. I liked :]