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  • run away with me

    run away with me (100)

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    Awww. This was awesome!!
    I loved it! :D
    February 16th, 2009 at 06:26am
  • beet pharm.

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    Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

    This has to be one of your best yet, Rex.

    I absolutely love it.

    Everything just seemed to flow so well. You made the relationship between them so nice, and it just worked so incredibly well.

    It was mystic and majestic and absolutely brilliant.

    You are such an amazing, talented writer, and you keep getting better with every single story.

    I cannot tell you how amazing this story is. I pictured it perfectly.

    Excellent detail, excellent plot.

    Beautiful.
    January 5th, 2009 at 10:20pm
  • Zakodia

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    This story was really cool. I thought it was a really interesting idea. But then again you always have interesting ideas, don't you? XD.

    This was some needed comic relief for the day.

    My favorite line- "I think I'm lost....lost in your eyes, that is"

    Ah, that just made me giggle. Anyways,

    Random Poem Time!!!

    Read the hand lines
    There's one of a lonely mind

    Drawn into a ruse
    Of one Madam Rue

    One sip
    Towards sin

    Chasing beauty
    Only to find one on duty

    Love at first sight
    Constantly tonight

    Purple seeping
    Into concrete

    A wandering soul again
    After love's reign

    Towards her he was magnetized
    Her dance hypnotized

    His loneliness faded away
    As they swayed.
    December 21st, 2008 at 05:57am
  • chasingstars;

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    Awwwww.
    Took you long enough. And HEY, I see DESCRIPTION. I told you so. :]

    "A strange urge overcame him, something inside him telling him to throw aside his inhibitions and chase after every woman he saw. Normally, Gerard never would’ve done such a thing, but the world was spinning around him, so that was exactly what he did."

    I'm sorry, but that had me laughing. Loudly. Like, my-mom-told-me-to-shut-up loud. I could just...SO see it. Also, Lyn owns. At life. Always.
    December 19th, 2008 at 10:16pm
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