Sunrise - Comments

I love how you were able to capture the love and affection that Billie has for Adie. It was extremely well written. While reading it, I felt as if Billie was actually talking to me in this weird narrative way. I also loved the song references, and that you were able to incoperate them so well into your story. And my favorite part...well, I don't think I could choose! :tehe: The whole thing is gorgeous. It made me adore Billie and Adie's relationship even more, if it's possible. Great job.

aw that rocks! i got it as soon as it said malachite. what IS malachite anyway?

*dances around in a circle* i like this story, and i like that song too [=

Oh. My. God. This is sooo beautiful!

I swear, I almost cried when I read it!

oh my god...i'm blinking back tears.
NOTHING i've read made me do that! that says a lot.

Waoh..... Awesome.
Reaaly good, and short and sweet. I loved it!

Wow.

Well, thank you all for taking the time to read it. I'm actually pretty proud of this one.

:hug:

This was adorable. Beautifully written :D

that made me cryyyy.
it was beautiful.
and it reminded me of someone.

Aww, It was amazing. =']

This is beautiful.

And I do NOT use that term lightly.

this was amazing. I loved the entire thing. this is kind of what I think of when I think about where exactly the inspiration came from. More specifically than just Adrienne.

*blush*

Thank you.

I really liked it. Could I, I would quote the entire thing. You got the melancholy just right, actually, that's a wrong word. Regret? Just simple yearning, longing? I don't know. But I do know the feeling and you conveyed it amazingly. I am not a fan of this kind of narration, but I didn't seem to mind it here. And I know what song you were trying to interpret and you did a marvellous job.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww omg it made me cry it was soooo sweet, i love it

You have actually made me go "Aaaw" out loud. Which is an amazing feat.
I loved it!


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