June 20th, 2013 at 04:33am
I must admit, Twilight is my guilty pleasure. Emmett being my favourite
I liked the banter between the guys, I must say you write male dialogue very well.
Pfft, you should be honoured Emmett has taken an interest in your daughter
My god! it's so intense! I'm sat here with my mouth hanging open reading this! Admittedly, with a sad expression, but awwed nonetheless!
Gahh!! Such a powerful yet heart warming ending!! I love how you wrote Rosalie as a flash of light, comparing her to an angel, lovely!
I am just in awe of you! You have such a wonderful and creative imagination. You captured his character perfectly, yet put your own spin on his story.
Amazing! The imagery you create and the way your words just flow into each other, is outstanding! I'm just in love with your writing
I'm glad you liked it