Dawn's Abyss - Comments

Wow AMAZING!!! The last time I bawled my eyes out like I did was when I read New Moon. Anyway it was a really really great story. I'm so sad that they couldn't end up together. But like I said amazing :)

Wow. That was an amazing story. I'm awestruck, actually. And desperately trying to hold in the tears so my mom doesn't notice I've been doing something besides homework >.<
It was addicting, and the characters were amazing! And I can't possibly hate you for killing Ashton, because you brought him into existance in the first place!
Wow.
I never suspected Loraine, that's for sure -.-
Wow...

I loved this story! The last chapter made me cry ='[
I think this would be a great movie to watch!
Hahaha, i just ran my fingers over my desk and felt something wet, I realized they were the tears i spilt earlier!
Let me know if you won the contest!!

i agree with the person above me. This story is one of the best stories i have ever read. It's amazing!! I really hope u win/won that contest! You deserve it!

OH.MY.GOD.
I laughed. :lmfao I cried. I even had those WTF moments. :shock:
Overall this is one of the best story I have ever read.

oh my gosh!
I cried. I seriously cried!
Ash died!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
D=

I'm glad she's doing fine though.

hope there's a sequel :D...pretty please write a sequel.

you're definitely going to win. i love this story soo much it's unbeliaveable. :)

I don't need to wish you luck. You already won as far as I'm concerned. =].
That was seriously a beautiful ending. Other words couldn't even begin to do it justice. This was amazing. I adored every second of it. You should be proud of yourself; this was p e r f e c t.

YAY!!
IT WAS AMAZING!!
I loved it!

Ok I'm not just saying this to be nice but of All the stories I've read on mibba yours are my favorite!
This story was Amazing and it ended perfectly...Almost like there could be a sequel in the future...? lol
Good luck on the Young Aurthors Contest I think you'll do great!

So basically this chapter made me cry my eyes out.
and I dont cry easily at all.
It was amazing. And I actually like that he died.
This story wasnt the basic happy ending.
It still had a happy ending, but in its own way.
I really enjoyed reading this.
And good luck in the compition,
even though you don't need it.

Amazing!

omigod that was soo sad!!! aw!!!!

MLE

NOOO!!!
POOR ASHTON!!
: '(

I hate you.
That's about all I can say right now.
I want a happy ending, and you killed the loveliest boy.
Except he did die romantically.
I still hate you, ha.

Oh my goodness! Ashton didn't just die! Noo! *Tear*

Wow, even though that was pretty said you had a brilliant idea on how to end that chapter. He had cancer but he died with by a bullet instead. Wow. Amazing.

ahhhh i cant believe you killed him offfffffffffffffffffffff
they didnt even get to kiss
they are soul mates
they are suppose to live together forever.
how is she suppose to find another love
if you killed her soul mate
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

im terribley sad right now.

AWW!!
She knows her past!!
: )

Are you done writing this? I hope not, even after you turn it in, you should write now.
I want her and Ashton together, lol

That's kinda creepy. A stalker Algebra teacher. I think I should be afraid now, ha.
Wow. Carson seems really sweet, and exactly what Dawn Parma needs. =]. Ha, this should be interesting when he meets Ashton now. =].