Dawn's Abyss - Comments

i havent told you this but i barely discovered this story today. it i truly amazing. did you write that song in chapter three? i must say i am a bit jealous of you. you write with such great details and you use 'big' words. haha you must have a huge vocabulary. you sound very educated. so i am jealous. maybe i should read the dictionary. haha anyways i really love your story! and earlier i posted a comment when i was a bit hyper so it sounded lame, but here a comment that i'm taking time on to write. this is actually the longest comment i have ever written for anybody. so enjoy :) keep writing. i think when you finish it you should try to get it published.

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! haha you are amazing. Your writing style is brilliant and *squeals* i just really love it! :D

Sorry, triple post

sorry,
triple post

HOLY SHIT!
That update was amazing!

So...guess what?
It's still really good!
It just gets better.
Hope you get it finished in time
good luck =)
lol

I seriously cant wait to find out about her parents.
He said its a sad story? So Im kind of worried.
and where the hell is Ashton!

I wonder if her half brother and Ashton meet, will Carson reconize him or something?
Will he be able to tell them why they have a magnet pull to each other.

ah this story is getting better and better
and i need an update as soon as possible.

<3 Kim

omigod that was soo good!!!!! i cant believe he's her brother!!! keep writing!!!

MLE

Here's some reassurance. =]. That chapter ROCKED! Ha, I'm liking very much how the plot is picking up quite nicely. Ha, and go Dawn for figuring out the clue. =].

McNight Cobnutton?

I wonder what that means...
Update soon?

This is a really good story,
I like how Ashton is able to get her to open up.
: )

I am in love with this story.
Everything about is amazing.
The way you write.
The type of characters you have in it.
The story is great so far.
It all plays in my head, like I wish this would be a movie someday.

And I love that your characters are so different. Sometime when I read stories all the characters seem to be the same personality, the auther just choose who says what. but with your characters, there so different.

Update soon!

aw, really good update, but will dawn and ashton end up as sis and bro, cause that would be weird.

mle

is this story like a real life story? or does the poster have some sort of meaning, like the teacher is actually a which and stole the parents away or something. and then Ashton comes in, being the super sexy spy he is and they save Dawn's parent and kiss pasionatly!

I like this story it's really good! Please update soon!

yay the third chapter was incredible! ahh she's letting him in :D

I just came across this story today and i love it!
now i get to read two great stories from you :)

Wow this is really good.

MLE

The picture in the background is Dawn's Abyss, right? Just making sure. I love how surrounding the girl, you could see the faintest outline of angel wings... That's neat.

And another beautiful chapter. Ashton is like thee coolest person ever. Ha. He is the definition of awesome and amazing. Yep, he's both. =].

And yeah! Dawn is beginning to open up and talk a lot more. Ha, I was wondering too why Ashton didn't talk in an Aussie language... =].

Keep up the great writing Miss. Maggie. =].

loved the update
:)