Make Believe - Comments

Aww I love this oh so much! ^.^ I was listening to a song and it toally fit the latest chapter and it was awesome lol Please update soon

omg!!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!! i'm begging you!! this is sooo good! :)

ha, I'm stupid. (;

Oohlala, a spy! :D

I just finished reading the Hotter Kiss story, and then decided to read this.
And iii am definitely gonna be a fucking story stalker. 'kay?

omg that was the sweetest most cutest chapter i have read yet it was so magically delicious and just amazing bravo that was just pure genius congrats u are like god or something lol keep up the good work!

Awe...

Lizzy you are amazing...

I love this story...

I wish they could end up in a threesome, but this is good still

Update spoon!

I love this fic so, so, so much.
You're such an amazing writer.
I know I can always depend on you to write good stories with good spelling and grammar (and hot sex scenes ahah).
I look forward to the next chapter (hopefully soon ?:DDD)
I love that you included Bilvy!! He and Mikey would be ohsocute.

Wow Lizzy, that was so amazing. I love how their love is so unique and complicated, and so strong and serious even thoug their relationship started out in a very different way.

The genuine need they have to touch and be close to one another is so sweet! It gives me this really amazing feeling, and I just know that whatever happens to them they'll pull through, eventually. I do have a feeling that something will happen that will cause lots of problems for them, but with a love so strong they won't be apart for long and they'll deal and cope with anything that happens.

I think it was beautiful how the flashback blended in with the current events, and it seemed really natural too. I know you were excited about writing this long fluff chapter, and it shows because there's not ust love between the boys but your love for the story shows too in how it's carefully and well written. Nothing's rushed and their emotions are in focus, along with all of their little soft, loving kisses.

All of this is such an amazing story and I'm really psyched about finding out what will happen to our three amazing boys! (but maybe I should say 4 now that Bill's in the game? :tehe:)

:arms:

Oh Sweetie..You have no idea how much I love you for this.
This chapter, it was so perfect, it made my heart hurt but also want to burst with the final happiness they have together. I know that this isn't 'final' because it's not the end but stiiiiiill.

Them cuddling on the couch is just so fucking adorable, especailly with Bob's mom sleeping right there..like it's almost sneaky but not. XD

I love you, my hopeless romantic,” Gerard smiled at me, kissing each of the tattoos of those same words that are on each of my hands

*dies* Fuck, I see that so well, and it's just the fucking cutest thing ever!!

Zomg, there's just so much good stuff that I don't even know if I can name it all...Gerard bluching when Frank went to light the candles, Gerard's confession of being afraid, Frankie crying as he remembered that morning. (which I must say was a touching and PERFECT scene. I love scenens that are memories, it allows for so much more emotion...)

And the line "Just be with me" brought me to tears. Because I've said that and it was heartwrenching and vivid and god... *takes a moment to compose herself*
Hun, You write so many different things, but this is surely one of the best. The conflict, the emotion, the flow, it's all so perfect and goddamn, some of it is just so HOT. Seriously, I can't can't can't wait for more, because it's amazing and sweet and left me with a sad smile and feeling of contentment...(all except that want for MORE!)

Excellent, I have so much love for you right now, it's insane!

xoxoxo

nice update

what happens next

Yay, an update! I'm really excited about seeing more of Will Beckett and Mikey, btw, just for a little hint... ;)

But yeah, this chapter was really heartfelt and just plain nice--there seems to be a lack of niceness in stories lately. I hope it turns out alright for our boys.

Yay! Your finally back to writing! *hugs*
And yes! Get together...but still poor Mikey.
At least he's getting someone now. [:
more soon?

This was such a beautiful chapter. It was so sweet and soft.
Adding the flashback in there was great. I can't wait for more and I like how you decided to stop there and continue with the scene in Gerard's POV. This way we get his side and his feelings.

OoO...that was a really good chapter. i loved the flashback from Hotter Kiss. and then the realization that Frankie really wants to be with Gerard. that was grrrreat. :)
now im looking forward to the continuation of the sex scene! yayyyy! cant wait for more.

I definitely have to comment this, not because you 'begged' for us to love you back, but because you deserve it. And this chapter deserves it too, because it was just so overwhelming to have all this Frerard love in it and imagine the real scene that could happen just like this at any moment of our/their lives. I think you know what I mean...

I believe it took you a lot of courage to write this update, as you say that you don't have much feedback on the story, but it definitely needs to be updated more often. It's such a beautiful story, involving deep and true feelings, that once might have been broken. Now, though, the boys have finally made it through what they have with each, and all the problems seem so far away from their memories when they love each other as a proof of what they're truly and deeply feeling.
It felt so right to read this update, dear Lizzy, because it was so beautiful and it's exactly what the story needed: the union of the incomparable lovers.

I wonder what will happen to the 'trio' they started in the prequel, because I think I might have missed some important details about it, but I'm sure you'll help me understand this with time. I believe in you and I believe in the story. Everyone should definitely comment this, it was damn beautiful.

Thank you, Lizzy, for another fantastic story.
And we definitely love you, never forget that!
:arms:

To be honest... I forgot about this story.
But now it's back, it's really awesome!! (hehe. I'm using the word 'awesome' a lot today.. and yesterday).
I think the whole 'ending the chapter in the middle of a sex scene' thing, will make more people comment.
Even though that's never happened to me before (because I haven't really put much of that on, as of yet). Usually, with stories I do read that get lots of comments, it's cuz of that.
And not getting many comments sucks. I know how it feels, how depressing it is, so that's why I'm commenting on this now. :mrgreen:

not bad, I really liked it

You definitely need to keep William around cause now Mikey can have someone. I don't like him not being loved.

William!!

OMGZ!
William!!!!!!!!

Yes, he needs to stay in the story! It's so perfect, I was like "but who is Mikey going to be with? that poor boy needs someone! He's lost everyone!" and then sweet William shows up. *sigh*

I read the whole first story and loved it and now this is shaping up to be an awesome sequel! ^_^