October 7th, 2008 at 04:36am
I agree, capitalize the i's.
but really, that's awesome.
Pure inspiration tends to look something like that.
:D
Doubtful Goodbyes - Comments
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May 14th, 2008 at 02:39am
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That was really good.
It made my stomach hurt, which I've noticed only happen with stories that I tend to fall in love with.
Her heart no longer beats for me, but mine will remain forever, the constant beating of her name. Her gentle touch, i will never feel again, and he warm smile, i will only see from afar.
That was really nice. It made me sigh and go "Awww."
A bit of constructive criticism: Capitalize your personal I's.
You tend to leave them lowercase. You can see that in the except I posted above. That's why I bolded the i's
Oh, and the layout-
BEAUTIFUL.July 6th, 2007 at 07:20pm -
Wowwy wow wow!
lol
great great
really good
lol
libby
More When Ever If EVER! :D :D :DJune 30th, 2007 at 03:25pm -
First comment, woot woot.
IT'S AWESOME, KRISTA!
you better write more...=KJune 6th, 2007 at 02:28am
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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