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  • FallBackDown

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    Totally just re-read the whole story and remembered why I adore this so much!
    New chapter is brilliantly written! I do feel rather sorry for Zack!
    Looking forward to more! x
    November 21st, 2011 at 04:47pm
  • didyoueventry

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    OMG AN UPDATE!!!
    i almost died when i saw!
    i'm so happy that you're writing and that you updated this story that i love and always makes me laugh and think, loved it =D
    i more often than not wish i could take a look at what would happen if i did this or that, if i took one road or the other and make sure i was making the right choices... wouldn't that be something?
    always love zach's point of view and his take on things, hopefully you'll have more updates up soon? *puppy dog eyes*

    LOVE YOU!
    November 17th, 2011 at 08:36pm
  • Call The Angels

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    Good God could I identify with that chapter. The nagging ex feeling kills me, every time.
    Loved it dear. :)
    November 17th, 2011 at 06:54pm
  • DaniGates

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    lmao. I was a little confused at first. Then I saw the point to it. And let me tell you. I laughed. That chapter was pretty awesome. I love it!
    August 25th, 2010 at 12:46am
  • AriStarshine

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    OMG this is hilarious!!! By the second time that Matt spoke I began laughing, thinking "what if they were talking about twilight.." And they actually were!! the more I read the more it became funny...
    Pure genius, and so realistic!Loved it!
    December 4th, 2009 at 05:22pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    At first I was like ".. the fuck are they talking about?"
    And then I read this line: Matt: Oh yeah, like fucking morphing into a goddamn wolf is any better. and was all "OMG it's Twilight!" Haha, I loved the way they were arguing over the situation.. for some reason it just sounds so true to life. Like how they would actually argue about it. :P

    This was truly a stroke of genius, Meg. Haha.
    December 2nd, 2009 at 12:55pm
  • lightsoutbb

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    LMFAO this update was pure genius baby, oh yessss!!!! team edward and team matt all the way!!!
    i love youuuuuuu<33333
    December 2nd, 2009 at 04:43am
  • DoSomethingCRAZY!

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    hahahahaha. loved it.
    December 2nd, 2009 at 01:55am
  • burning bright.

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    I completely concur that this chapter was a total stroke of genius.
    I'd give anything to see those two actually arguing their sides. It'd be priceless.
    December 2nd, 2009 at 01:14am
  • Call The Angels

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    I'm not even quite sure what to say about this chapter.
    It made me giggle.
    Loved it dear!
    December 1st, 2009 at 07:20pm
  • YourMomOnSteroids

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    Hahahah as SOON as the convo between them started, I KNEW what they were getting at :P

    xox
    December 1st, 2009 at 05:22am
  • beccalynn

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    rofl, this made my day.
    thanks.
    moreee?
    November 13th, 2009 at 10:09pm
  • AriStarshine

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    Wow, either you're a guy and I didn't know it or you are very very very good at writing...!!!
    I really hope you haven't found the real diary and are putting it on internet without his permission...
    if you have his permission, say Hi, from me ;)
    I love every chapter, how they're totally random and plausibles... How comes that Brian is always such an ass? :) loved the feeling at the beginning of that chapter -like wth?? why should he write that?-.
    liked the story behind the name, is that real or not?
    love, Ari
    November 12th, 2009 at 08:27pm
  • x.Kris.x

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    Wow, what an ominous entry. I'm curious to see where you go with it, especially that list bit about 'striking first'.

    I really enjoy this story for its honesty. Everything you write about just rings true on so many levels, even the ones about sex and shit. It's interesting how, even though slightly feminine, you somehow manage to convey the thoughts of a male; Zacky, to be precise. I can imagine him sitting there, writing this. It's great. I'm wondering where you're going to take this though. There are so many channels you could follow with what you've already written, and any of them would make fantastic, dramatic stories. Even if you don't, I think just having diary entries is really creative, and do an amazing job of painting a picture of his life.
    November 11th, 2009 at 09:28pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    Wow, the last update was amazing. The last paragraph is so very, very true, too. I'm jealous I can't come up with something that sounds as deep. Haha, kidding. :P

    But seriously, great update! :)
    November 11th, 2009 at 07:05pm
  • burning bright.

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    Such wise words.
    I loved it.
    =)
    November 11th, 2009 at 03:42am
  • YourMomOnSteroids

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    Dayummm. The last blurb on that recent update...I love it. I kinda wanna put it on my Facebook, obvs with cred. to you, cuz it's just so true, and so good. And I love it :)
    xox
    November 10th, 2009 at 07:55am
  • Call The Angels

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    This chapter made me smile, because it's so very true, and it's become my outlook on life. I get so sick of two faced people, as I'm sure everyone else does. :)

    I adored it love.
    November 10th, 2009 at 03:26am
  • burning bright.

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    That chapter was all of amazing.
    I can't wait for the next one.
    August 23rd, 2009 at 09:50pm
  • lightsoutbb

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    zachary is so deep ;-)
    i love his take on things, it feels honest and it makes me grin how very right he is lmfao

    i LOVE you and i love that you've updated this one, hope you do it again soon<3333333333
    August 23rd, 2009 at 07:55pm