Hey, I could add to your NIN army! I love Trent and used to write stories about him all the time, but they all got deleted. I should start again.
I just subscribed to your story, and it looks really good. I want to read it, but I have to be honest - the formatting is making it hard to read. And also, Mibba will suspend your story or irk you with constant messages about following their guidelines if you don't make it where all lines of dialogue are on separate lines, and there are spaces between each paragraph.
If you did that, it would be so nice for readers with tired eyes like me. *huggs*