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  • OMJEEZAY;

    OMJEEZAY; (100)

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    Use spell check for your chapters, I only read the first one and it already had a lot of typos AND incorrect use of capitilization. But the story is alright I guess. Not to be rude or anything, just check your spelling.
    December 22nd, 2008 at 05:08pm
  • the envious.

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    Awk-ward..Yea, its a little fast but besides that its good girlay <3 Dance Dance Dance Dance Dance
    December 22nd, 2008 at 04:00pm
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