Shh! The killer is Near - Comments

  • forever_free

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    wow... oh no i have a feeling Oliver totally gave her away!!!!!!! AHHHHH! NOOOO!
    RUN HEATHER RUN!!! *calms down*
    haha sorry that was my moment to spaz x]
    i luv this story very much! updates soon?
    May 1st, 2009 at 08:21am
  • Tambry

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    wow! ur story is awesome!!! i have a couple of questions thought:
    1) why has jace goone all crazy on them ? is it because his brouther is dead?
    2) Why califnea (sorry i cant a spell worth shit)?
    3) i though that jace liked her?
    4) why is oliver sooooooooo stuiped?seriously he cant just leave her alone?
    and have u ever head break stuff by limp bizkit because when zane asked about when she was going to go to the beach with chase when he left that sounds like a song that he would listen to but be warned it has alot of swears in thought but i love it! keep up thoughs chapters!
    April 27th, 2009 at 11:01pm
  • sunny lover

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    oh my god i love this story. please keep writing! :D
    January 26th, 2009 at 01:10am
  • breezy

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    oh no oli is a bad guys right? idk. this is a really good story. i wabbs it mucho. :D
    January 23rd, 2009 at 07:44am
  • RockOut

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    geez Oliver way to pretty much sell her out! more soon please!?!
    January 17th, 2009 at 07:20pm
  • laskater87

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    really cool story i like it alot although i think it is going kinda slow but hey it is good
    January 16th, 2009 at 08:16pm
  • Retro.

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    “So, where would you like me to shoot him? In the heart, for loving you? In the head for thinking he could save you? Or in the neck? For taking your breath away?”

    That is just a beautiful line. I love it so much.

    Great update, hope for another one soon!
    January 16th, 2009 at 05:19pm
  • RockOut

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    that would be horrible to have to keep thinking about when they were going to find her and prolly kill her. wonderful update!
    January 16th, 2009 at 05:00am
  • sunset boulevard

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    Again, simply amazing. I like how you ended that chapter. ;]
    January 16th, 2009 at 04:10am
  • sunset boulevard

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    *breaks out into song*

    Good update : D
    Smiley
    January 13th, 2009 at 03:52am
  • BloodLover

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    I'm loving it
    January 13th, 2009 at 01:32am
  • RockOut

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    soo now jace is taking over huh? what exactly is it that he is in charge of anyways?
    January 13th, 2009 at 12:10am
  • RockOut

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    Love your story!! update soon please :-)

    *subscribes*
    January 12th, 2009 at 07:45pm
  • sunset boulevard

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    Awesome update doll. :cute:

    Psst. I am sooo sorry it took me forever to comment!! My computer commit suicide on me, and it's been a while since I've been on. I should be getting it fixed soon, but until then, comments might be a bit slow.
    January 10th, 2009 at 06:28pm
  • Call Me Moonlight

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    whoot!!!!

    *claps* i know right? i'm kind of confused as to why we don't have school
    January 6th, 2009 at 05:41pm
  • sunset boulevard

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    Amazing, as always.
    December 23rd, 2008 at 01:11am
  • The.Secret.Keeper

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    update soon!
    December 23rd, 2008 at 12:01am
  • sunset boulevard

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    I heart this story soo much. In Love
    Update soon, kay?
    December 22nd, 2008 at 11:19pm
  • liarliarpantsonfire

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    I LOVED it!!!! Please update soon!!!!

    :-D

    The first chapter wasnt boring! It was a filler so then you could get it started. Fillers are never excited but they're never boring either!

    * Squee *

    Cant wait til the next one :-D
    December 22nd, 2008 at 03:15pm
  • InYourEyes2410

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    yay love it. their paths will surely meet along the way? xx
    December 22nd, 2008 at 11:22am