pLEaSe UpdAte FOr mY SakE! I love how the story is going!
October 16th, 2010 at 04:45pm
thanks.
- mizshortie:
- EscapeThisSunday:
- omb i love this story.
well it adds the suspense of waiting for a dead cat.
- swmchick8:
- Lol. Gina, it seems, is giving my advice for her story to you. Something about a dead cat? WTF?! Sounds good, but I would write it before putting it in the summary.
Because now we know what's going to happen, just not how.
Which could be just as interesting.
well ok. i was bored had time on my hands. i was gonna delete that
- CheerChicka:
- Honestly, I don't like the whole (Which is pretty lame if you think about it) thing, the ' Oh yeah, did I mention that I live in a suburb of Chicago?', and the whole ' and of course, it HAD to be getting dark out.
To me, It is just too much imput and info. Also, "then, it went dark" isn't too bad of a cliffhanger it's just that you give all kinds of information in the paragragh before it and then it's like nothing.
These are just my opinions. Don't think I'm being brutal, it's just what I think.
~G~
the mystery guy? you will have to see
- ely.:
- Very nice. I'm intrigued...
is the mystery guy the very hot friend? or perhaps someone else?
I'll just have to wait and see. :)