LOL now that's how quickie's should be. is she ever going to be able to tell him how emotionally attached she gets? hell, if a guy can make you see stars in a few mins, i'm pretty sure any girl would get emotionally attached...
I love it! It's always wonderful to come across a Carden story. I once described him as a mixture of Jack White and Eeyore; he's just that adorable. Adorable in a sarcastic, pessimistic sort of way.
But that's just part of his charm. :)
And you're a magnificent writer; this certainly is the best Carden story I have ever read. Keep it up!