Offend In Every Way - Comments

Oh, Hammy.

Not Frank. Not Frankie. D:

So well written, though.

It was amazing, even if he wasn't actually in it. So sad.

You should write more Iero-fics...your level of description's quite nice. :cute:

this story is beautiful.

you should make more. this is just awesomely awesome.

that's so sad, yet so good. you're a very good writer

Whoa, that was just amazing. It was pretty said, but good. Make more soon.

Oh wow! I liked that. But you spelled "meant" as "ment" and that kind of ruined it for me.

I never pay attention to the chapter descriptions, so I didn't even think it was MCR. You posted in my journal, I thought it was original. But my God, it was amazing. I think the monolouge from the narrator to her mom was a bit too much, especially since there weren't any interruptions. I think there should have been an interruption.

But at the end. The last line was...whoa. I was like "O_O holy..."

But it was good. I liked it. And I think you should write more oneshots (you obviously are). Thumbs up from lyrical mess.

Amazing
Absolutly amazing
I could feel the emotion
there are literally tears in my eyes now
You need to write some more