Oh wow! I liked that. But you spelled "meant" as "ment" and that kind of ruined it for me.
I never pay attention to the chapter descriptions, so I didn't even think it was MCR. You posted in my journal, I thought it was original. But my God, it was amazing. I think the monolouge from the narrator to her mom was a bit too much, especially since there weren't any interruptions. I think there should have been an interruption.
But at the end. The last line was...whoa. I was like "O_O holy..."
But it was good. I liked it. And I think you should write more oneshots (you obviously are). Thumbs up from lyrical mess.
Not Frank. Not Frankie. D:
So well written, though.
It was amazing, even if he wasn't actually in it. So sad.
You should write more Iero-fics...your level of description's quite nice. :cute: