Sweet Child O'Mine - Comments

ahh god girl you're killing me here lol
I loved it :D amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter. please please please have it out soon

that was so good, I'm glad you updated!!

this story is so good
its one of my faves (Y)
hurry up and update lol :D

That was extreamly hard to read, I was tearing up for heavens sake and I don't do that.
"The yeas i've wasted are nothing to the tears that i've tasted."
Sis that was one of my most favorite lines EVER. I can and have seen your writing grow and surpass mine a long time ago which makes me very proud.:)

That was sad...

Oh I was tearing up.

“I don’t want to bother you but,” I felt tears burn through my eyes again “I need to tell someone and its just that I’ve been hurt so much and I don’t think I can take anymore." My voice soon became a whisper and it cracked "Sometimes it feels like the world is on my shoulders, everyone is leaning on me and if feels like the world is almost over. People make jokes because they don’t understand me but they just don’t see my real side. They will never understand why I am so hurt.” The tears flowed and my chest burned from the pain my chest was producing. “I grew up a fucking screw up, my mom got introduced to the game, got an ounce and just fucking blew up. But I want to just take this time out to be perfectly honest because there's a lot of shit I keep bottled that hurts deep inside of my soul. This boulder on my shoulder gets heavy and harder to hold and this load is like the weight of the world. I think my neck is breaking should I just give up? Or try to live up to these expectations? Everyday of my life I have been abused ever since I was fourteen.”

“What do you mean?” He whispered.

“When my mom can’t afford her drugs she forces me to have sex with them. They rape me and I beg them to stop,” I sobbed and my chest heaved as I tried to calm myself down. “But they wouldn’t. It hurts so badly and they took away my first time, my dignity, and my life. I was beaten everyday by them and my mom. She always took out her anger on me; I would never get a break. The guy who hurt me today was one of my mothers’ drug dealers. He wanted his money but before that he beat me and then raped me. I still feel every one of those men on me. I begged my mom to help me, to make them stop, but she ignored me.” Brian hugged me tighter and rubbed my back gently. I continued to rant on “I got a mother that's determined to make my life a living hell but I handle it well, given the circumstances I'm dealt. The years that I've wasted are nothing to the tears that I've tasted. I don’t want to live anymore; I just wish that I was never born. I just wish my mom would love me, is that so much to ask for?”

She should turn that into a song or something later on in the story and someone finds it and they record it for her. It can be her power song. idk, it was good. I was crying and its hard to make me cry.

you will always be safe with me. Lilly, know that you daddy's a soldier; nothing can take you from me. If you ever need anything, daddy will be right there. Well guess what? Daddy's here and I’m not going anywhere, baby. I love you.

Oh I loved the your daddy's a soldier. I had to read that a couple of times. Brian, mmm, mmm, mmm

More when you can.

i love this
you write amazingly <3

SADNESS

It's wonderful that they had a father-daughter moment! Thanks for the update... You saved me 15 minutes of boredom. ^_^

I'm so glad she opened up to Brian! I loved it, cant wait for more!!

aww :D that was so cute.
very good story :D very good

I just started reading your story this morning and I love it!! You have to update!! I love this story!!! BRAVO!!
=]

The last few chapters made me wanna cry for Lilly, and do horrible, unnamable things to her mother and the man. I so hope that there'll be another update soon!!!

update? please? please? please?

is she gonna tell him?

LOVED it :D can't wait for the next one. it's coming soon right?

I subscribed ... And I have nothing to say but, "Great chapter". X.x

aww poor Lilly.
she has to tell Brian what's going on!

oh she finally gets to tell. Oh man. that will help her in the long run though she doesn't wnat anyone to know. Brian should go kick their asses.

Lol haha see you are a great writer sis. Just look at the comments that people are leaving you.:)
Again I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
I really think you enjoy torchering people. lol
Anyway I can't wait for the next update.:)