Draco Malfoy's Famous Last Words - Comments

celestial_royalty (100)

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Oh my goodness, at the end. I don't know if I read the whole thing before in one go, but I did this time. And I did it with a surprisingly clear mind. And I felt so empty and sad and hollow when Evelyn died. I knew she would before it even happened, and I hated Ginny Weasley for, in my eyes, ruining everything. It was just so unnecessary. And she's just so irritating; Potter was too. The fact that he just took Evelyn's life and bossed her around like she was his child, even if she was his long-lost half-sister, was unacceptable. Insolent. He had no right. But it all worked out for the best, and for that, I'm happy.

June 1st, 2013 at 12:36pm

celestial_royalty (100)

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39- I feel like an idiot.

June 1st, 2013 at 12:24pm

celestial_royalty (100)

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In 38, I thought it would have been the most EXCELLENT touch for her to pour a drop of Liquid Life into Harry's lips. It would have connected your story to Rowling's impeccably, absolutely seamlessly.

June 1st, 2013 at 12:23pm

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30- I can't fucking believe they took her engagement ring. Who the fuck does that?! I wouldn't even just beg for it. I would Imperius the fuck out of them. HOW DARE THEY?! HOW DARE HE?! I would disown his stupid little bitch ass, COWARD!

June 1st, 2013 at 12:07pm

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30- I can't fucking believe they took her engagement ring. Who the fuck does that?! I wouldn't even just beg for it. I would Imperius the fuck out of them. HOW DARE THEY?! HOW DARE HE?! I would disown his stupid little bitch ass, COWARD!

June 1st, 2013 at 12:07pm

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Chapter 19- I remember this part of the story and it's definitely very touching. But since I've very recently read the prequel and first chapter of it, I'm confused because Steven and Rebecca have never shown anything but disdain for their children, and Evelyn seems to have returned the sentiment.

June 1st, 2013 at 11:46am

celestial_royalty (100)

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"Dark Spells change people." Bellatrix and Voldemort sound so wise...it's disturbing.

June 1st, 2013 at 11:31am

celestial_royalty (100)

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Bella sounds very logical in chapter 8. It's something I like, but also something I find rather strange as well. She was logical before too, in Japan when she retrieved Draco.

June 1st, 2013 at 11:23am

celestial_royalty (100)

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AHHHHHH I love it!!!!!! It's finished, and it's amazing!!!!! Damn what a great start to a new year- a roller coaster of emotions and you moved me with so many chapters. The ones I felt amazing enough to go back and quote are- 2,3,4 (if you think apparation is bad...),6,8,9,11,16,17,18,19,20,21 (is somebody feeling like a Slytherin today?),22,24,25.

Anyway, it's been an amazing journey and I hope this won't be the last time I read one of your masterpieces. Voldemort's character was very creative and well thought out. It really does always come back to love, doesn't it? I still find it hard to believe he'd give up his place but it gives the story a very unique flavor. Neville is bleh. BFFs are bomb. Good job thinking out new Dark Magic. The eyes, I think should retain natural color. Where would the world be if Draco Malfoy didn't have those intoxicating blue eyes?!

January 1st, 2012 at 11:55am

draloliane (100)

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OMFG.... I ADOOOOORE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!! omg.. this story is absolutely incredible definetly the best one i have ever read and i have read alot like seriously.... she comes back!!!!!!!!!!! I love this so much!!! aha i just cant even like think i am still so amazed at this story!! <333333333333

May 30th, 2011 at 02:59am

KeepThePeace (100)

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i love this. so much.

January 28th, 2011 at 06:47pm

LovelySinner (100)

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Loved it

January 25th, 2011 at 01:04am

butterfly.kisses. (100)

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The way you ended it was great. I feel happy about how it ended and knowing that she got everything she wanted. :)

January 25th, 2011 at 12:21am

Acid Milk (100)

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:) I loved it.

January 24th, 2011 at 01:21pm

Tasssshhh (100)

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Okay, so fair warning -- this is going to be one of those long comments that has a point at the end. I swear!

Sitting watching Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince yesterday and Malfoy snaps at Blaise. I had a flashback of reading a story on Quizilla about Blaise's sister who fell in love with Malfoy.
Made my boyfriend remind me of Blaise's last name and instantly hit up mibba to see if I could find the awesome story that I fell in love with. And obviously I did.
And I love it!
And i've read every chapter -- from the beginning of Dirty Little Secret to the latest chapter of this since around 6pm tonight. It's now 2am. I'm a bit sad hahahaha.
I love it and i'm hoping hoping hoping there's going to be an update soon. please please please?

August 5th, 2010 at 03:12am