The Technicolor Daydreamer; Folie A Deux. - Comments

Amazing update.
I kind of figured out that Bert was a drug dealer or something, it just seemed very fitting.
I can't wait until we get more updates <3

An update :)
This chapter was brilliant (like all of your chapters)
I can not wait for more and I'm so glad that this chapter was so long!

I miss this story...

Like OMG an update :) It was brilliant, and I may I say that Zacky is really, really annoying me! Update soon.

Amazing update.
They don't want to fuck with her, seriously.

Sorry to sound rude, but I am still waiting for that update :)

It's been ages since you've updated and dear little me is waiting with high expectations! I miss this story so much. Please, please update as soon as you can! :]

I feel so sorry for Gerard!
My heart bleeds for him!

You have some BBcoding mistakes in this chapter...

Love the update
Such a cute ending to it.

Wonderful update
I love love loved the way you described the kiss.
Also, lovely description of Frank's anger.
And the thing I loved the absolute most was when you said “Hell, maybe someone just felt like starting a fight, because everyone knows misery's a clingy, bipolar little sap who also gets off on causing other people pain.”
That is such a genius line.

(:

I believe so much in this story and in your writing.

This was an amazing update.
I feel so guilty about her getting nearly raped.
I'm glad they kissed though - they need each other.

Whoa.
I'm kind of at a bit of a loss for words, which doesn't happen often, mind you.
This is easily one of the best stories I've read in a while.
Your writing style is so unique, a strange mix of poetry and prose. I love it. You handle topics that could easily become "teen-angsty" and cliche without making them either. I'm usually not a big fan fiction person, especially not with bands like My Chemical Romance, because I've simply seen it done badly too much, but wow. You pull it off pretty much flawlessly, and especially since it's sort of “alternative reality” too.
I also like your the visual part of the story too. I like your uses of underlining, italics and bolding, as well as coloured text. It could become overpowering and distracting, but somehow it works with your writing style and topic.
Congratulations on wonderfully messed up characters, a fast-paced plot and nice-length chapters. None of this 499036840934820 pages per chapter stuff in this story. Your chapters are kind of "bite-sized", I think. Enough to be satisfied, but not so much that you get sick.
Last thing - I adored your prologue. That's really such an interesting theory. Congrats on being brave enough to imput a little God into your stories.
Overall I love it. I subscribed and am looking forward to updates
(:

Oh My God! Thank god for house keys! That was a friggin' scary chapter.
I hope Frankie is Ok. I know its kinda mean to Amia, but all through that chapter I was hoping Frank hadn't got into some trouble.

Can't wait for more!

That was dark dude, real dark.
I love that she used her house key to defend herself.

It was an interesting update
I honestly can't wait for more,

Ha ha, finally got to read this one. I love the way you write, it's very balanced in the way it keeps the pace. You don't have too much going on at once, but then you still have just the right amount to keep a reader going. Good job, Mia. *kiss*

Oh my God! Amazing update!
I love this story !
i don't want frankie to get hurt =[
Update soon please =]

I love the way you get her point of view across to us.
The way Frank can't win an agument with her is cute.

I'm worried about her safty though.
I don't want her to get hurt.
I don't want Frank to get hurt either.

Looks like I only missed one update :tehe:

Seize.

I love how you introduced not only her brother and sister but the way you introduced Bob, Ray, Mikey and re-introduced us to Gerard - it was a great way to do it.

Making them discus their stauts of 'dating' was well done, I've never read it done as well as you managed to do it so well done on doing it right!

I like how uncomfortable Frank was with the idea of her riding on his lap (that sounded dirty - I didn't intend for it to - I swear!) - it made the situation seem so much more real.

I don't like the idea of Bert even thinking about her - I don't want anything bad to happen to her or to Frank...

I can't wait for the next update - sorry it's taken so long for me to get caught up.

I’m so sorry it’s taken me so long to catch up with stories!
I’ve been back from Cornwall for two weeks tomorrow but I’ve just no had the energy to read any stories or I’ve been at work...
You’ll get a new comment for each update I’ve missed
Neat, eh?
I’m catching up now x

oooh dear. I think there may be a fight =S Amia is so sweet! And Frank is just well...FRIGGIN SMEXY AND SO AWESOME! Update soon!